This is the last time, often said to some, but these words dig deep inside
and they beat like a drum

--I need this tonight, just to save my life
I need this tonight, then I'll make things right
If not it could be the end, it just might
But for me to get through this fight, I need this tonight--

THE DECISION

Well I'm in debt with the drug mob, and I'm losin my job
Got 8 months of probation and a daughter to take care of
I'm on my last string, but strung out on "Medz"
cause the drugs are sinkin and its fucked with my head
and decption of reality I once had is now dead...
For in life, we deceit ourselves from whats right and far down the road it will bring to the light
Because my mentality detached from reality...
and my brains gone insane with thoughts of fatality, Its just not right,
But tonight, I need this money to keep up with this fight


--I need this tonight, just to save my life
I need this tonight, then I'll make things right
If not it could be the end, it just might
But for me to go through this fight, I need this tonight--


Waitin in the dark alley, on the stoop, lookin for someone to pass

THE RIGHT TIME

So I wait, contmeplate, the right descision I make, and though its hard, its a simple pill to take...
then up straight, an elder passes and a new vision flashes, the time now approaches
'Take this man out, consume all his riches, let him sleep with roaches'
Shopping bags in his hand, so I know hes got cash
Plans are still, KILL, take what hes got and then dash.
Wrap this bandana round my head, and make my disguise
I'm now the walkin reaper, and I'll make his demise.
Struck hard with my left, took my right and swung down
HA, I put this fridged man down and convene him, with the ground
Pull out my COLT, but then Time seems to slow down....


--I need this tonight, just to save my life
I need this tonight, then I'll make things right
If not it could be the end, it just might
But for me to go through this fight, I need this tonight--

GUNPOINT.

I can barely see him but I know he's there
the dim light hides him, but in his shining eyes I stare.
My vision is blurred so I can hardly see
and my perception turns to judgement and makes me believe
that killing this man is my only way out, but then true conscience comes in and destroys my doubt
My (drugged) head now starts to say...
"SHOOT this fucker down you dont got all day!
You know you need this fuckin money so you live through today
And hey,this works out good for him right?
He don't needa suffer HERE no more he can enjoy the next life...
Plus this man is too old, he's been ready death, take him outta this and WATCH HIM breathe his last breath....
thoughts are disrupted, and a quivering voice interrupted
'You don't want to do this sir!'
WHAT THE FUCK! fuck this guy, don't try to deny, you know you wanna see this mans brain-cells fly!!
he's just fuckin with ya head, oh wait, thats me...so forget that then
Cause I control you I own you! Hows that for ya Ben?
Oh yeah, and one more, we need more of the gore, so wheres a good place?
Better than the guy before? Ok, then Blast him right in the face!"
Descion's is almost completeing but broken thoughts are still streaming...
And this frivolous work that I keep on leading?
Decieveing, but pleasing to the lies that I'm reading.....

But what lasted a minute was seeming like a day to me, and now my minds made up
Pull the trigger and lets see...

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It peirces his head as soon as I know this man is now dead
I look around with no sound, then I start to breakdown because
I'm emotionally erupted and myself distrusted
I peer down in dispair, leave all his belongings there,
And walk home alone, cause theres one bullet to spare...









HEADLINES: MAYOR JOHN C. O'MALLY IS GUNNED DOWN IN AN ALLEY.

(Obituaries: Turn the next page.....)





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Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief...

Fucking sick drop, fam this was a nice read good way to controll the viewer mind with the picture you painting had me aintisapating the out come very well layed out I dig it word, I didn't exspect to see this type of drop from you but I was surely impressed my dude word congrats ur flow was good and all....

9.5/10
Outstanding drop....

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THE B.E.S.T CREW..........

Suprisingly, I thank you for the feed, we used to have somewhat of beef, but now I respect you Murdah, thank you


uppin this as well

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Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief...

Yeah i liked this drop.....

Was'nt complicated, you kept it simple.Really easy to keep reading and u stayed on point throughtout.
Multi's were quite simple but worked well never-the-less.
I related to the topic quite well as iv been in this situation before with all those thoughts running round, but even if i had'nt you painted the picture very well for those who had'nt.

8.5/10


BUMPING THIS.

A solid topical effort man, you told a lengthly story and climbed inside the head of your narrator like a good storyteller should do. Topically this wasn't that original although the remorse your guy felt at the end of the piece was a nice touch. A stronger rhyme scheme and use of vocab would be things to consider for the future but definately a notch above a lot of stuff i read on rapboards.

Keep posting, cheers for the rep.