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04-28-05, 09:28 PM | #1 | ||
The Games Prodigy
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Drop That Shit- Verse and Hook
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Girl, Lemme see you shake ya ass like a goose
Do like T.I. say, and lemme see ya get loose Play ya cards right, and you can open the knose Cuz you the queen of hearts and im a wild duece Girl, I like it when you give it to me rough Throwin me down on the bed showin me that ya tough Then we go at it for hours cuz 10 minutes aint enough I can tell your "addicted" cus you like the "Vanilla stuff" Girl, I really like your style Cuz every once in a while We hit a " menaja-trois " make it a little mo wild " Damn Child!" You hit me spicy hot, cuz you kno i dont like it mild Now..... Reach to the side and catch the wall You cant leave yet cuz i put you on call Tellin me you dont want it cuz we up in the mall " But soon "..... you on ya knees in a bathroom stall Thats how we do it and all We make the scene a little more tence When i shock you hard just like an electric fence Say girl, ya head seem only a little dence So ima cumm in ya face..... give ya head a little rinse (Hook) Drop that shit Work that shit Hit it old school and Twerk that shit Ride That shit Roll that shit Do it like Tigger and Bounce that shit VERSE TWO COMMIN SOON |
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04-28-05, 09:59 PM | #2 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Shit was pretty descent. Off structure, couldve been better. But nice for me...6/10
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04-28-05, 11:30 PM | #3 | |
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
hmm, need to up ya vocab, get more emotion on
a topic like this, i saw what you were trying to do but you lacked in a couple key areas like..creativity and syllable count on ya bars, but its koo,......you'll elevate.....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-28-05, 11:47 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
Hmm.. This was a decent piece..
really needs to be worked on... Next time elevate on vocab, use more emotions.. Some nicer wordplay, You also got to try to line up your bars and not just make fillers instead of punchlines.. Overall needs improvement , Drop a link or this will be closed
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04-29-05, 04:41 PM | #5 | ||
The Games Prodigy
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IP:
k i will in a few minutes mann plus i tried to center my text and put bars in my shit but it kept fuckin up on my com but ill send a link
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04-30-05, 11:31 AM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Girls see me they be like that boy a mack and he stay paid,
Niggas scared cause they know I stay wit the Heat like Shaq and D'Wayne Wade, These niggas on RV soft, a nigga like me stay wit the shotty, Plus a few punchlines like I'm throwin a party. These niggas ain't scarin nobody, I come from a family of criminals, so my little seeds gonna be born wit a rep like they Growing up Gotti...... Easy I ain't gonna spit anymore until I get a battle. Until then EASY Last edited by CO's Own : 04-30-05 at 11:48 AM. |
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04-30-05, 11:48 AM | #7 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
J- Dot u shitty, your weapons is like cap guns, u can't blast
off nothin, yo lyrics is weak, nigga U AIN'T CASS, get off his wood, u ain't good, Man I put yo punk ass in a Body Bag. This nigga said he from Mackamento, nigga u from Sac-town, I'm from Killumbus, niggas'll body u quick before u can pull the mack out, Our niggas don't snitch somebody get killed they don't know who's at fault, If I was u I wouldn't respond, I shoot your brains in yo hands and tell u hold them thoughts... EASY |
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