YO HERES MY SHIT---

look at this pussy he gonna kick my ass?
ill type real slow cuz i know you cant read fast
actin tough like an internet gangsta
tell your sista last night i forgot to thank her
you wnna beat me? heres what to do
go and invent fake people maybe theyll vote for you
honestly ima save it for later
by the way luke im your dad like darth vader
after this rhyme if you still want some
holla at me later while im fuckin your mom

spit it dog peace

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ALL EVIL ALL THA TIME http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/att...ntid=9017&stc=1

welll...u made this really stupid...so ima make the thread and paste your verse
then i'll spit..paece

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nm dude.....i'll just key some shit up rightn ow.....i wont make another thread..

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prewritten?..quite possible..he's wack? thats clear
not even mentionable you simply "Callin Out Savir"
remove Tha Evil Times, we left with a dislexic painting
So I guess All in All, this wack herb is opposed to satan
what an oxymoron, dumb shit just lingers in ya lips
wed my punches..oops!..the wrong middle finger i flipped
ya dj spins..but ya rotative axis stunt to sudden halts
i said ...:thumbsup: ...Goodluck..so your verse wasnt my fault
im done with dissing..u nothin but a spec to of dust to me
so i'll save u a line and campaign...hey yall vote for me

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dont make me explain....just look at his avy, his sig, and his name..peace...

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it aint prewritten but i aint gonna bitch-- you came hard dog no hard feelins
lets let the votes drop-- good luck all around

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ALL EVIL ALL THA TIME http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/att...ntid=9017&stc=1

this is a battle...so vote....

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Savir had the better orchestrated verse...

His punches were personal...

And he was wittier with wordplay.

Natas was kinda whack with that Darth Vader shit...

And the fucking moms and sis...
Is so outdated and played it's not even close to funny anymore.
Especially when no wordplay is thrown in at all...

Just too much of an amateur for Savir...
I suspect Savir is an alias...
Eh...maybe...we'll see.

Peace

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

I took the liberty to rename this thread.

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

thank u token..but now they
wont understand my opener...lol
nah..uppin

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uppin

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damn-- im learnin my lessons quickly-- ima come harder each time til i be blowin up this shit

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I sorta like Natas's opener, not too much becouse of his first line though. I did'nt see old name of this thread but based on Savirs open, I can priity much take a guess, I had to go back and read it after Token changed it just to understand it. All in All, Nataz know this one is a lose win situation for him.

V/Savir

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

savir ur verse was jus all around better better punches flow and strucutre the other guy needs to elevate a lot but savir u jus came harder all around

v/savir
return the favor drop a vote then ill poll my vote on this battle pm me after u vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130756