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Old 03-30-09, 01:59 AM   #1
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just fuckin around. felt like doing some shit.
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Old 04-11-09, 05:42 PM   #2
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i think this one is a miss personally dawg... like it caught up at the end, but the begining when u were repeating, wack... the chorus.. wack. you made it ok though with the second verse and the first verse the second part of it not the first cuz first part with all that repeating was weak

this wasn't good in general though, but don't worry bout it dude cuz I think you're dope

this was one was just a miss imo

but uhh, it doesnt matter though cuz dumb girls will like this cuz it has a sort of mainstream feel to it and it's mushy.
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Old 04-11-09, 09:55 PM   #3
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BWHAHA no lie..i feel the same way.
I felt the only thing i like was the second verse.

but girls did eat it up! hahahaha

its for a mixtape gear'd towards those girls. called "About A Girl"

so most of the new shit i'm doing is to finish that.
thanks for the honest imput though.
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