10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first
no feedin
15 mins
drop afta checkin

aiight checkin in and keystyin right away.............................................. ...............................

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'limp' wrists throw 'punches', hardly 'hurt or connect',
no need for 'gloves', only i can 'knuckle' your texts,
like 'celebratory scandal', to this site yous a 'disgrace',
just like an 'electric candle', the 'flames' you spit are fake,
your trajectory of lightweight punches missed alltogether,
like the rain and sickness, bein me i dont mix with weather,
i could use a name play but between us theres diversity,
you got bout as much a reputation as a polish university*
[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=97305you asked for 'double' my time, 'wattz' all that about,
i cud crush ya in 7 lines, but you'd hav sumfin to moan about



blah, all i could come up with


LAST LINE- because of the 10 line minimum.

the line about weather, im sayin im sickness, and we dont mix.

*the polish university line, how many you heard of???


aiight

peace

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Its like my punches is literally hittin cause they whippin ya ass//
I’m put ya head in tha dumpster cause ya thoughts are trash//
you can be a laker and wear jersey 42 and still couldn’t be worthy//
when is comes to connecting punches 9/10 times ya ass is unworthy//
ya name is 007 u juss like tha game ya aint no killer ya misleading//
I hit wit punches to dismantle ya insides leave u wit internal bleeding//
ya messages don’t get a cross like ya playin a game of charades//
Ur the definition of illness? yea when people are discussing aids//
It’s not emcees that ur bruising its juss drugs that ur abusing//
He’s battling whack emcees like handcuff and losing//(LMAO)

well.........

007 merked here.........just an all around better verse, and it was keystyle


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punches - 007
flow - 007
metas - 007
vocab/complexity - tie
structuye - tie
opener - 007
closer - 007

vote - 007

hit this up honestly........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97258

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opener+1-007
closer+1-007...double time...gold
punches+2-007....wattz..i didnt like the worth/unworthy at all..no hard punches.
personals+2-007...that double time was very nice
wordplay+1-007
multis+1-blah
complexity+1-007..mainly again cuz the worthy..and aids shit
originality+1-007
cornyness-2-blah
enjoyment+1-007

overall--sorry ...but merking in progress..opinion.....0007 wins....

please drop honest vote here....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97210

Look James Bond merked you johnny, better flow, punches, opener, closer, the whole nine yards
007-Dont use ", i your punches and metas should be figured out if they are good enough, pointing it out makes it seemed forced.
Johnny-
"you can be a laker and wear jersey 42 and still couldn’t be worthy//
when is comes to connecting punches 9/10 times ya ass is unworthy//"
thats not gona work, dont add de un or anything before a word to make it rhyme, also dont laugh at your own stuff

please drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97048

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

yo im havin droppin on the poll so bring this to investigated reports
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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

you imma peep this...i do think after checking it twice, 007 came wit the goods..had some awesome display of wordplay and creativity...that link was great...i think watts spat great..had some good punches and creativity..but i do think 007 came with all the goods, punches metas flow, there is some ties in there.....

vote=007

plz hit up the link below and vote honestly battle is gettin slept on..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1

aaiight peeps uppin for more votes............................................. ........................................

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aiight 2cnd time uppin............................................. ................................

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3rd time uppin................................. peeps dont sleep.............................

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4th time uppn c'mon peeps lets get this batle shut so i can drop in anohter........................................... ...................

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Votes Polled... Double-0 Seven Winning This 4-0.
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aiight last time uppin............................... c'mon peeps................................... drop a honest vote........................

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