thought id drop by and drop a quick free, right quik for yall

this rhyme tight and sick like fingers in a virgins' pussy
its my time to shine like Pac of the east coast, you see
im the deepest thing to hit the streets since potholes
no doubt these multis flip scripts like hoes on hot poles
dubz sicker then two homos fuckin with the HIV virus
this bringin down the house like fat bitches in the Sirus
my dick quik, fuckin virgins faster then that nigga Telly
dont got da belly like biggie, but got digits on the celly
like a dyke wit da mic, niggas cant touch this like Hammer
believe this Grammer more Country then nelly out the slammer
im hot, u freezin i see ya lips like the color of sky, mostly blue
but that aint the worst, nose drips quick like niggas wit da flu
im wiser then most, this a fatal attraction like Close and Douglas
im hot like 230 degree fiyaz, but my priors are givin a fuck less
dubz more ill then Magic, this free better have u remember me
if not, i'll run ya brain around the block to jog ya fucking memory
you cant be quik, jump the candle stick..dont burn ya back
u fuck jill on the hill, and fetched the water..u still aint jack
i dropped enuff fo free, catch me on the demo wit Gene Bigman
that shits sick..last bar on this site and i still aint got a sig man

im the deepest thing to hit the streets since potholes/...

^^^u hella bit that line...

from who.. i got an idea for that from somewhere but it aint that

black~magik made that line up like 8 months ago...hes even had it as his title for the last 3 weeks...but i aint hatin...im just sayin...

yo man.. i havent been on this site fo made long, dont take me as a biter..i jus came back to see wuz good on here cuz im workin on finishin my demo

nice drop if its urs its pretty tight playa 9/10

if u didnt bite that and its urs then its pretty tight ......nice wordplay good vocab and a hard structure iight keep on tha site cuz i look forward to see some ya other shit

i aint stayin on this site.. i was on here awhile ago and i jus thought id drop a little sumthin for yall, im workin on finishin my demo, be easy niggaz

^^ wtf man??? Thats my line dawg...I'll give u the link if u don't believe me...but yea...I posted that line in a song months ago dawg...wtF???

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158373

^^Check the link yall...read thru the verse...The line is near the end, but its there...

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yo man.. no beef, i aint been on here fo mad long.. and i aint look thru ur shit..i jus dropped sumthin my bad dawg

dont even trip...I just wanted to make sure...You good man...1

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uppin this shit

it was decent noting to good.....

all around 7.5......

flow was decent,
creativeness was average..
word-play decent....


keep working on ya demo....

drop feed back on my oepn mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865