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07-16-02, 03:35 PM | #1 | |
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True Passion Lover II
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True Passion Lover II
my true love is like a full grown rose but without the thorns/ wearing my heart on my sleeve you can see that it is already worn/ from the ups and downs winter snow and the summer rains/ I cant get you out of my system like my souls is trapped boudn by chains/ I love you girl more than anything I know and I hope hope holds you in my arms forever more/ Your bodies hitting like Roy Jones jr/ well can i get knocked out/ I wanna show you something let you know what im about/ *heres a thought* A nite of passion me and you doing the love tango outside till the morning/ i hear thunder and feel electrified but im here forget the warning/ *as it starts storming, the animal savagery is reborn inside us* your hairs wild, red and black pieces of the blanket are flying everywhere/ im touching your -ish and i feel your stomach jumping -this must tickle/ look in your eyes, licking your neck and just let my love trickle/ down down down to your inner thighs ... to that special spot only my love can reach/ at first i was a rookie but its only a subject you can teach/ me how to burst open the dam in your heart/ let the flood gates of emotional loose on my city/ |
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07-16-02, 10:44 PM | #2 | |
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dis PAPISWIFEY
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dat was hot boi. i've neva disliked ya stuff. i think i like love poems more than regular ones...dat might be why i like dis so much. but yo, i really was feelin it and i like ya style. i wanna see more.i was really feelin tha last 2 lines.much luv
oh and check out my latest "then and now" and tell me wutcha think. one |
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07-16-02, 11:32 PM | #3 | |
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Wow
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Definitely feeling this piece more than the pre-quel. You a freak tho. LOL. Keep poppin' out pieces. Holla.
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07-18-02, 09:35 AM | #4 | |
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IP:
uppin
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07-19-02, 10:41 AM | #5 | |
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uppin
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07-19-02, 12:09 PM | #6 | |
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awww, dang ... hot ish ...
diggin it ... *as it starts storming, the animal savagery is reborn inside us* sets tha sence excellently! Props Pz ~1~ |
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