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07-07-03, 10:17 PM | #1 | |
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Tickled Sloths- Camarac and Maven
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Maven:
perpetuality gets me, I'm stuck in this place forever the sun shines, trying futily to break through stormy weather you're the sun you see, and you destroy my very being the heat of your memory affects vision, you're all I'm seeing now and forever, you said, well, I wish that you had fuck love, passion eludes me, this mime is forever sad I act out my emotions, depicting struggle and hate optimism is unreachable, drained like rain to storm grates I'm sedate and irate, looking for synonyms for my anger helium filled hearts make me pass out, like horse dander you just started it off, opening minds like so many books seeing intuitive thoughts while I hover over the looks and my mouth goes dry under your all-seeing eyes discovering lies, where the truth dirties clean skies and procreating brainwaves of stained glass quality fact is, in the end my back is to the wall, you see? Camarac: Diamond sight blinded by the serpents sapphire tongue Live fast, die young and save on government funds. Take each day as it comes, gospel speech is not the boss of me Living prophecy, forced to follow this fortune cookie philosophy In all honesty, I started searching for somewhere I belong Only to be slammed back on the foundations I built my dreams upon. With demons gone, Removed from the void I stop and sleep through Where the worlds the Oyster Of a generation that hates sea food. I speak to my inner self Get sea sick just looking at oceans So its weird my Voyage to success, Took place among Waves of emotion So make way for the hopeless, The children of the corn with no focus Too afraid to hold on to those lost forgotten moments Peace
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07-07-03, 10:20 PM | #2 | ||
Tickle My Sloth
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First Guy Came The Best. .
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07-07-03, 10:23 PM | #3 | |
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naw, the second cat ownded, nucca!
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07-07-03, 10:32 PM | #4 | ||
Tickle My Sloth
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^Tickle My Sloth. .
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07-07-03, 10:34 PM | #5 | |
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^Werd to your motherboard
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07-07-03, 10:37 PM | #6 | ||
Tampons are expensive
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Shiznit's Thoughts:
let me first say that it was sooooo sweet...u 2 love each other... hehe the fact that MAven started it with such aggressively great astounding words to begin with...the second (Camarac) blasted from the middle to the last...hehe the content was well though out and i liked how camarac structured his verse...it came out strong... Maven's verse was great...the flow definitely fits the whole piece..props for that over all nice drop...good joB! p.s. i love the title...sounds intriguing...coming from the both of you..
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07-07-03, 10:42 PM | #7 | ||
Tickle My Sloth
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^ Werd.
You Can Tickle My Sloth Anytime. . |
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07-07-03, 10:48 PM | #8 | ||
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in a strictly heterosexual way.... oh, and my verse was about a chick. We jsut keystyled about what was in the mind at the time, get what I'm sayink? PEEsE yo!
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07-07-03, 10:51 PM | #9 | |||
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This was a good open mic i liked this ish it was great..
My favorite lines.. Quote:
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07-07-03, 10:53 PM | #10 | |
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hahahaha.....
anyway....dope shit....both of ya....wudnt expect anythin less from u Cam...!! anyway.....check my shit ......Hard and Harsh |
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07-07-03, 10:56 PM | #11 | ||
Tickle My Sloth
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^ Done already bredjin. .
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07-08-03, 08:40 AM | #12 | |
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goin superman
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07-08-03, 09:38 AM | #13 | ||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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lol... nice man... which one's you understatement?... I'm assuming it's (maven) not sure tho... lol, ne-way I liked the flow of the second guy (Camarac) his shit kinda sparkled... lol, I liked how maven had a really pictoral rhyme, there was a lot ov visualization burried in the piece form both now that I look again... keep it up 1...
and Pat call me some time man, 510-1091
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07-08-03, 10:36 AM | #14 | ||
Tickle My Sloth
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^uppsie.
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07-08-03, 11:40 AM | #15 | |
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nice stuff here as bigg ez sed dont expect nothin less cam, ne way keep on smoke nice 1 boys oo check out my rhyme Sniper
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