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05-07-07, 01:40 AM | #1 | |
I don't lose
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Good Morning
IP:
word up did it a while ago...tryin to get some feed on it....
lil love song for the lady... riggs on the beat...apexx with the mixing.... Good Morning - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5228054 i left feed on inspector by ebrics so big by paradyce and that one kidyork song....i dont feel like copying and pasting links...get at me if its REALLY that important tho....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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05-07-07, 01:46 AM | #2 | |
-BTR-
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IP:
beat comes in pretty cool..really feelin the beat
verse comes in nice..quality is really good. apexx does a good job with this...lyrically i think its kinda weird how you end lines short and leave this empty space there..kinda leaves the listener hangin like "whats next?" hook is real empty..wish you woulda put something in there like some adlibs verse 2 comes in now liking this verse..flow and delivery are real cool... verse 3 the dubs give it more attitude so thats cool..lyrically this is a lot better than the first 2 verses. this track overall was real good..hit me up man..we gots to collabo.. |
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05-07-07, 01:57 AM | #3 | |
I don't lose
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IP:
ill get at you online soon
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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05-10-07, 01:11 AM | #5 | |
I don't lose
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IP:
can i get some love?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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05-10-07, 03:14 AM | #6 | ||
Nt Your Average
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IP:
beats soundin gd, feelin your flow on this one, got a mix up, i like the hook cause its not too busy an it aint takin over the sample, 2nd verse soundin betta i think, sounds sik...apexx on da mixin you can tell, lol mixin is sik...i like the fluxuations in your voice breh sounds sik wid your delivery, an your voice is sik.....3rd verse sounds good, i like the adlibs on this trak mostly, makes the trak i think....lyrics soundin good too, emotional & deep...iunno sounds pretty much polished, sik trak....
what you been up 2 lately nyways, aint tlked in time lol
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05-10-07, 04:47 PM | #7 | ||
Sam Dope
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IP:
Beat is pretty chillin, you come in with real nice energy..Quality is hot..Lyrics are on some real shit, I like it. First verse is hot man..Hook is pretty chill, sample is dope. Second verse is nice as well..Everything is consistent which is good..Third verse seems like it's lacking a bit compared to the other 2, but still dope..Solid shit.
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05-10-07, 08:42 PM | #8 | ||
L.E
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IP:
Beat is kinda bleh...
Quality is decent, not wonderful. Flow is fast. Lyrics are decent. It was alright, not my kind of track. Keep it up. |
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05-12-07, 02:20 AM | #9 | |
Addicted
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IP:
this was ight...i jus culdnt vibe wit the voice seems like its been heard befor...lyrical content is coo delivery is coo....beat is ight....im not sure if im feelin the hook its kinda dull.....otherthan that coo track
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05-12-07, 07:53 PM | #10 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
feelin the intensity on the beat...and the beat is hard hittin
mixin is nice...no doubt slick track bro 1 |
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