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02-15-04, 11:19 AM | #1 | ||
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that's life pt1: a must peep don't sleep
IP:
people say that the youth of today/
got it good in every and any perspective manner and way/ they say that compared to their life we got it made easy/ i just sit back laugh and look at these fucks like they're crazy/ cause ya'll have absolutely no idea how are life realy is/ ya'll looked down on 19 year kim with a 3 year kid/ ya'll called her a slut and slut but know half of the story/ ya'll got an image of her as that trick on yesterdays maury/ so let me tell you what happened how she got pregnant with her daughter/ it all started with the absence of her mother and alchoholic father/ whenever he bothered to get some juice inside of his system/ he would go and molest her and her younger sister/ she was ten and realized her house wasn't a place for a child/ so she packed some of her clothes and ran for 20 miles/ she got to her aunts house worn out and filled with tears/ her aunt told her that she could stay for a few years/ until the day her aunt died straight flat on her back/ because of her addiction for sex and dangerous habbit with crack/ kim was a young girl now tryin to survie on her own/ with nobody to help her except for some buged out cusins at home/ no money in her pockets and no food for her to eat/ so she dropped out of school and sold her body on the street/ then it happened one day a customer busted a rubber/ now she's not know as a growin girl she's know as a young mother/ when people are forced to do things that no one would like/ we must must al realized that that's just life/ when things are fucked up and we just wanna make it right/ when worst comes to worst just know that's life/ i'll put pt2 in when i get replies
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02-15-04, 11:38 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
i thought this was a decent piece....There was alot of emotion in this...the imagery i thought was portrayed well....original concept, havent read a piece like that before...
it was a nice read, good story...i'll check out pt.2 when you put it up....keep at it. peace. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431 |
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02-16-04, 02:21 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
good lookin on the reply but i need more replies to add more so i don't feal like i'm just waistin my time on it aight
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shut the fuck up even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun dead in middle of little of little italy little did we know that we riddle some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun |
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02-17-04, 03:18 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
still need more replies
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shut the fuck up even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun dead in middle of little of little italy little did we know that we riddle some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun |
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