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Old 02-14-09, 11:16 PM   #1
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Week 5: Alphabetized (0-0) .vs Crossfire (0-0)

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Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Alpha 1 bar
Thursday: Crossfire 2 bars
Friday: Alpha Dealer 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Close

Feeding is allowed and will be optional
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Old 02-14-09, 11:29 PM   #2
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Ur old dude, Cross' joints be hurtin.. but he'll show, we hope
so we can all see some of that fire...
... and the pile of ash after hes smoked
 
Old 02-16-09, 12:24 PM   #3
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Says im old,,Yet u the 1 whos 50 n plays bowls,,is it just^or is ur memory missing?
Take up singing,,Alphabetized.Fuck the alphabet in a battle,,,What Counts Is hiting
Sounds yung or isnt listnin,his Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny
Age diss weak..u sound 15..n"Those lines burnin me?"Son you aint even Singeing me


Fuk lets see what u got

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Old 02-16-09, 02:10 PM   #4
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Lol...

Now we know Alpha's the king, and I bring the thunder, man
while you bring your own wack punches...
... that no one can understand..
 
Old 02-16-09, 02:16 PM   #5
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LOL


alpha ya 1st bar wasn't bad. a little played, but you seemed to word it ok. 2nd bar was a nice little flip. but wasnt really direct. overall i've seen you drop alot harder than this


cross-umm.. i dont even know what to say about your punches. I've tried to direct you..and you seem to be going no where...so yeah.


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Old 02-16-09, 02:18 PM   #6
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... that no one can understand..


Ok?
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Old 02-16-09, 02:34 PM   #7
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damn man Nice Creativity.
 
Old 02-16-09, 02:51 PM   #8
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Ur old dude, Cross' joints be hurtin.. but he'll show, we hope
so we can all see some of that fire...
... and the pile of ash after hes smoked
wasn't feeling it...its ok but really basic

Says im old,,Yet u the 1 whos 50 n plays bowls,,is it just^or is ur memory missing?
Take up singing,,Alphabetized.Fuck the alphabet in a battle,,,What Counts Is hiting
Sounds yung or isnt listnin,his Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny
Age diss weak..u sound 15..n"Those lines burnin me?"Son you aint even Singeing me
your bars are way too long, don't flow right. and they are not effective. not really even punches, well really weak ones if they are. you should be able to see what your doing wrong by just looking at other battlers, but for real change it up cause its not working

Now we know Alpha's the king, and I bring the thunder, man
while you bring your own wack punches...
... that no one can understand..
meh wasn't too hard, like you couldn't think of anything, or prolly didn't try

vote abcd
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Old 02-17-09, 07:49 AM   #9
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Now we know Alpha's the king, and I bring the thunder, man
while you bring your own wack punches...
... that no one can understand..

This was kinda funny..hit hard because I can barely understand crossfires punches

Ur old dude, Cross' joints be hurtin.. but he'll show, we hope
so we can all see some of that fire...
... and the pile of ash after hes smoked

This was an older concept, but the flip was cool


Says im old,,Yet u the 1 whos 50 n plays bowls,,is it just^or is ur memory missing?
Take up singing,,Alphabetized.Fuck the alphabet in a battle,,,What Counts Is hiting

Had too much going on here...focus on one concept and direct it more at him

Sounds yung or isnt listnin,his Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny
Age diss weak..u sound 15..n"Those lines burnin me?"Son you aint even Singeing me

this was lame...dont every through a Santa Clause punch man


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Old 02-17-09, 08:39 PM   #10
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Ur old dude, Cross' joints be hurtin.. but he'll show, we hope
so we can all see some of that fire...
... and the pile of ash after hes smoked
joint wordplay? ok

Says im old,,Yet u the 1 whos 50 n plays bowls,,is it just^or is ur memory missing?
Take up singing,,Alphabetized.Fuck the alphabet in a battle,,,What Counts Is hiting
lmfao this was a fucking dope punch
Sounds yung or isnt listnin,his Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny
Age diss weak..u sound 15..n"Those lines burnin me?"Son you aint even Singeing me
lol no

Now we know Alpha's the king, and I bring the thunder, man
while you bring your own wack punches...
... that no one can understand..
meh

v/ crossfire by far. sick first punch
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Old 02-19-09, 04:44 PM   #11
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Cross fire, your bars are super jumbled, learn to space them out better and direct your punches bro....make your ideas less smashed up, and it will come across alot better

but, its obvious Alpha won, had the better flip

vote: Alpha
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Old 02-20-09, 06:57 PM   #12
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"Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny"

^ That won this battle for me, easily.[/sarcasm]

What the fuck?

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Old 02-20-09, 08:26 PM   #13
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Ur old dude, Cross' joints be hurtin.. but he'll show, we hope
so we can all see some of that fire...
... and the pile of ash after hes smoked
^not bad, maybe its just the wording..
Now we know Alpha's the king, and I bring the thunder, man
while you bring your own wack punches...
... that no one can understand..
^lol

vs

Says im old,,Yet u the 1 whos 50 n plays bowls,,is it just^or is ur memory missing?
Take up singing,,Alphabetized.Fuck the alphabet in a battle,,,What Counts Is hiting
^blah, statement
Sounds yung or isnt listnin,his Flows Not nice so santas Takin a dump in his chimny
Age diss weak..u sound 15..n"Those lines burnin me?"Son you aint even Singeing me
^very weak attempt at a flip

all I can say is thank civil for editing your post, sparing yourself from total embarrassment, elevate for real
v/Alpha
 
Old 02-23-09, 02:55 PM   #14
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Alpha wins 1-0

Crossfire loses 0-1
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