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the kid nate | 0 | 0% | |
Da Problem Child | 5 | 100.00% | |
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05-02-08, 03:55 PM | #1 | ||
New Jack
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the kid nate vs Da Problem Child
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-05-08 at 03:55 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. DQ'ed... asking for votes |
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05-02-08, 03:56 PM | #2 | |
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Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-08 03:56 PM.
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05-02-08, 04:34 PM | #3 | |
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the kid nate has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-08 04:34 PM.
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05-02-08, 04:43 PM | #4 | ||
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heard your words and your words aint piff
sit back take a month to reword your shit leave you in a hursh thats the worste i get you get ripped quick of the first verse i spit that hot verse i spit can make u melt you a champ in the hood then imma take your belt your best oppurtunity to wait for help how niggas gna like u if u hate yourself face yourself face me im raisin hell imma keep killen rappers till im placed in jail im a threat to the game better raise my belt you a hungry mc well taste the shell make it well... bring heat and piston all i need is 2 bars and im beatin this bitch dude so i twist the metal the metal twist u your chick got a dick that make you a sick dude.. |
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05-02-08, 04:55 PM | #5 | ||
New Jack
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i am a Problem ur just a kid who needz a father
he's da perfect example on why u shoudnt use cheap condums he's a push over to rap battlez so he should expect this got cascade gunz that will clean ya block like tetris he wouldnt blow up if he was involved in a suicide bombing this cat couldnt get his bills-up if his first name was chauncey and coincedently, like billups i will leave him 0 - 1 then take care of the kid like he was my son of course, and L to this nigga will deiliver call me da giver, cuz this nigga wont have a flow if he jumped in the river he iz still ceimen, itz no way he's a killer his flow iz negative like a useless picture 2 min keystyle
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05-02-08, 05:17 PM | #6 | ||
New Jack
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KO! all day on this one iz nothin to me
DA PROBLEM CHILD
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05-02-08, 05:20 PM | #7 | ||
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i typed my shit in like 1 minute and my flow is goin hard you are a little unorganized but tight punchlines...
we will see the results be safe~ signed~ the kid nate |
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05-02-08, 06:15 PM | #8 | ||
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i kinda caught u resusing your shit u used that on me and that other nigga
Da Problem Child : i deliver an L to this fake fuck Sonny Barz. vs Da Problem Child check it out ~signed the kid nate |
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05-03-08, 12:03 AM | #9 | ||
New Jack
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cuz thaz my theme nigga iz to deliver u an L. iz not like itz a hard punch line of nothin, itz iz just a saying
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05-03-08, 12:52 AM | #10 | |
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Voted For: Da Problem Child
i dont wanna seem like i am on da problem's dick or nothin but I and every bodi else will see that he won this battle. why? CREATIVITY: D.PROBLEM FLOW:T.K.NATE PUNCHES.PROBLEM PERSONAL.PROBLEM WIN.PROBLEM
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05-03-08, 06:51 AM | #11 | ||
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read his shit out loud its soo choppy then read mine...
all i gotta say is just when you thought it was over nate came back to snap like a cobra see when i rap the track takes u over so this child better strap more ammo then a solider hold up your flows choppy dude fuck ur music i leave u choped and screwed if i see u on tv ill pop the tube man you just signed up for a shot to lose im to calm and cool while this dudes not beef pop off he is immagrating like a milllion guats you can be signed to the doc and you still would flop all your raps get a little to physical stepping up to me i pound you to minerals ill leave your ghost here to post like im spirtual you cant hang the kid nate puts the fear in u see me im one of a kind i finish verses before u finish one of ur lines i think ahead u take steps one of a time thats why im a vet and u just one of them guys u be dumb if u tried ill merk u till you dead wake up in the ER surrounded by sugery beds kid nap u place in my basment deserted for decs (decades) the kid nate? im sick minded people call me perverted instead i come hard on the thread taken care of this problem child like i was nursery med. |
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05-03-08, 01:29 PM | #12 | |
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This was feedback posted for the kid nate
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checkin polllllllllll
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05-03-08, 02:28 PM | #13 | ||
don't try.
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Voted For: Da Problem Child
he wouldnt blow up if he was involved in a suicide bombing this cat couldnt get his bills-up if his first name was chauncey vs nothing v/DPC
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05-03-08, 07:17 PM | #14 | ||
New Jack
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thaz was up uppin for votez
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05-04-08, 03:16 AM | #15 | |
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Voted For: Da Problem Child
damn this is a fucking weak battle. No offence at all to either of you, Im glad to see you both battling. But you both need to step your game up. First of all, creativity is lacking, both of you need ot look outside the circle and come up with some creative punches and approaches ot your battles. Secondly, learn to fucking spell correctly. The spelling in this is shamefull. Before you say it, yes it is a text verse, so spelling is important. Structure, The Kid nate, your structure isnt too bad. When writing bars, keep out of syllables in your bar length, keep them the same. This makes for better reading, more smooth setups and better text flow. The Kid nate, you have no standout punches, but you do win on structure and flow. You rverse came together alot better, but is lacking hard hitting punches and creativity. Da Problem Child you have some seriously wack shit in your verse bro. example: i am a Problem ur just a kid who needz a father he's da perfect example on why u shoudnt use cheap condums That is a pointless opener bro and you shoul dof bounced into battle mode alot more solid than that. You rflow is off, including that huge stretched and force3d punch. Your punches are simple and not creative at all, you need to learn to set your punches up and then execute them to hit hard!! You do win on the fact you do have punches in your verse, even if they are weak as fuck. No hate, real talk. |
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