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05-06-03, 07:15 PM | #1 | ||
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A TruE RaPPeR
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::ELEMENT::
...::A masterful lyricist in disguise::... But you can always find the true rapper if you see the flame in his eyes// There merciful, full of rage, you can see words, cruves and maybe even phrase// A true rapper shows his true color, when he discifers one after another// A true rapper raps from the soul, even if what he has 2 say could neva be controlled// A true rappers mind is like a mental institution, your flows keep comin and comin till you have a perfect solution// Its like there mic is there progenitor, its in there heart, in there flows, it starts from the core// A true rapper, can capture, timing// Timing is everything expecially with rhyming// Style is another ELEMENT of a true rapper// You hold your own you'll have your own chapter// Only a true rapper understands a true lyrik, your not true if you dont feel it and hear it// A true rapper goes into a outrageous fit, when nothing he says is just quite it// But if your not a true rapper dont force the flame that has never been lit... ~> still gotta up the vocab<~ |
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05-06-03, 07:19 PM | #2 | ||
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Hit me up with some feedback
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05-06-03, 07:42 PM | #3 | |
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....da flow was aight.....i guess...it was really forced in places, and not forced at all in places..even it all out, you'll only get betta, peace...
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05-06-03, 07:43 PM | #4 | ||
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i was messin on this one cheak out my other one crazy
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