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02-14-04, 02:56 AM | #1 | |
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okay...i just got done readin some shit in frontlines cuz i was bored,
and i haven't been in frontlines for months. The shit i see in there is ridiculous so i'm gonna give u all some pointers. I know we have Wackness Emergency center, but that isn't kept up to date. So its up to yall whether to listen or not. First Off: Structure with structure theres various styles to choose from in the field of being elite and advanced writing. So i will show u the up-to-date versions and the version thats still effective. I will also show u what not to use. structure should not be used: blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah/ blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah/ not end a line with a / blah blah multi blah multi blah multi blah blah~multi~multi~blah~blah blah blah multi~extended blah there is a such thing of too much multies in text. u can use those in audio but using them in text is not only considered gay but loses power for the punch. also, do not extend the lines structure that is considerable to use read some of the battles from battlers such as Evolve, Baron, Trapt Wit, G.Hod, etc... this will show u different styles of structure to use effectively. for example: blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah setup blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah punch (next word in this line here should rhyme off of the last word used in the punch) thats a common structure thats still effective another example: blah blah blah...blah blah blah..blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah... ...blah blah blah [b] okay..this is just an example that shouldn't be used my newbs right off back..this style is when u elevate so u don't mess it up. notice the .... but u don't want to use too many of those fillers. also notice the change up...though u see three lines...its actually the setup and the punch. the ... in the second line end with ... and in the third line begin with ... making it one line. just don't focus on this too much. okay...thats it for right now. This is on structure. maybe another time i will post something on punches and setups and wordplay, which u all have to learn big time. just use this to help u out and helping u elevate. hope it helped. Goodluck 13th
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02-14-04, 09:44 AM | #2 | |
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Post in Tutorials maybe..?
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02-14-04, 09:53 AM | #3 | ||
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lol naw itll be more seen here an ya i think noobz gettin newer on all boards
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02-14-04, 09:58 AM | #4 | |
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Im not on a really newbie level..but, I already knew this..but it's always good to take advice..thanks for your time...I guess..
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02-16-04, 04:13 AM | #5 | |
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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Structure also depends on how you 'rap'
You can stretch like penskills or go midget lines like sureal just find whats comphortable for you |
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02-16-04, 04:23 AM | #6 | ||
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Exactly...just to conform to a style because other people use it is bullshit.
Nicely Organized...little validity. This should be removed. I'd call it a good starting point...but it's only a good starting point for those who it will apply to. |
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02-16-04, 04:35 AM | #7 | |
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We need more 'structure' posts for text
this is definitely a great post .......
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Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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02-16-04, 06:43 AM | #8 | ||
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SHUT THE FUCK UP! Don't like it.. Don't read it..
You act like you're Gods gift to hip hop 13th. |
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02-16-04, 05:21 PM | #9 | ||
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WTF?!...gods gift to hip hop?...sorry...i don't even see myself as that cockwrestler...this was seriously to help newbs.. appreciate the support Fiorz.. uno
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02-16-04, 10:31 AM | #10 | ||
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^^or hes just helping people elevate...
consider helpin peeps for god sake |
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02-16-04, 10:40 AM | #11 | ||
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Hmmm that explain this thread really good Ill give textcee the best tip... go cop a $5 dollar mic |
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02-16-04, 10:44 AM | #12 | ||
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^^hes helpin newb's like you and you throw it bak in his face....
fuk em 13th.....dnt help agen...... and for your info, he dus hav a mic and he is audio so ur in trouble |
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02-16-04, 08:40 PM | #13 | ||
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swear thats the funniest post ive ever read
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Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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02-16-04, 10:57 PM | #14 | ||
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okay...seriously Alkatrakz...my dick hurts... so stop riding it...gay ass cyber stalker
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02-16-04, 10:46 AM | #15 | |
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^ i know 13th does... i was talking to the newB textcees... dont jump to conclusions kid
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