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06-06-05, 03:34 PM | #1 | |
Middle Weight
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Trying To Do it
IP:
Trying To Do it
In town vital with a sound title like car owners find Bazaar donors to this lame game just goners of the blind Here with Ebonics like stereophonic record songs and Avoid wrong contracts, some you can’t payback trapped no plan Sophistication of the wealthy can twist a situation unhealthy Like a divorce court the force support the female very stealthy Rap more art while cats sore at heart about my success On route to progress like promotions on jobs after tests An ocean of slobs rest after failing multiple choice quests Try elude clown that be on rude grounds like illegal Fence post they’re dense most the time like an eagle They’re birds of prey even nerds say beware but who Dare cross me got a boss spree of rhymes that’s brand new With a plan true I’m a tough baby with a powder puff lady Get her wet stuff go crazy in bed lips thin and red can’t phase me Butter by the pound when I utter sounds of corrupt vibrations And duck citations from the police in the streets up relations Between gangs got mean fangs like vampires bring devastation Suck the blood of microphones cats try drive stakes in my heart And often look for my coffin |
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06-06-05, 03:51 PM | #2 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
Forced rhymes, makes no sense.
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~Wrekless You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways// In the opposite direction of the gat that he says// He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are// before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse// Site Record- Wins:0 Losses:0 |
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06-06-05, 05:01 PM | #3 | |
Middle Weight
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IP:
Xenofly thanks for the crit doe
on a course blind with forced rhymes put up with criticism hard to foot the rhythm of dissatisfaction too much brisk action from replies a thug from streets but love my peeps even though they in the club with heat |
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06-06-05, 05:05 PM | #4 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
^^^ much betta. U kno wat ur doin ur just forcin it into ur raps but u let that last little lyric flow.
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~Wrekless You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways// In the opposite direction of the gat that he says// He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are// before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse// Site Record- Wins:0 Losses:0 |
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06-06-05, 07:10 PM | #5 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
yea i agree wi him, not to good.......keep elevatin boi i know u can do it u got a lot of potentioal......hey yo put some feedback on mine...........DRAMA
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06-06-05, 11:45 PM | #6 | |
Middle Weight
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IP:
thanks for the props
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