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08-26-03, 03:29 PM | #1 | ||
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The Revelution Parts 1~3
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"The Revolution (Part 1)"
Yo, some of these older cats seem to want to discredit and discourage me Saying it’s already been done, and you biting a classic, Legacy But to the critics and haters I say: This be the year 2001 And this is the truth of the revolution Now, Gill, you said the revolution will not be televised But, man, this thang done broke prime time worldwide Malcolm hit the nail on the head when he said, "The chickens have come home to roost Now AmeriKKKa is all afraid and ready to engage in a coup They need to go back to them roots Re-evaluate this whole situation Realize this shit all began with their deviation" From the paths of righteousness 400 yearz of blood crying out from the Earth Can no longer be repressed Now God is stepping into address these injustices Cause justice is infinite And baby, it’s Judgement Day Instead of gearing up for acts of retaliation You need to be somewhere facin’ the East And prostratin and prayin for peace AmeriKKKA wipe the bloodlust from your mouth AmeriKKKA wipe the greed from your eyes Recognize that the revolution has been officially televised "The Revolution (Part 2)" Though the AmeriKKKAn revolution has been televised This Real World revolution will go unrealized Absorbed by the glassy cornea of eyes Recorded for all posterity While mothers reject birth control for hysterectomy Instead of natural reproduction We choose to alter genetic construction Play God without discussion The game be roulette—Russian Because these are the days of our lives No longer husbands and wives But babies daddies and babies mommas Providing us with real life dramas The revolution will not be televised But is now a reel of pre-recorded Discorded Media lies One million American will not witness our cries As we take to the streets in an up rise The Amerikkkan flag will be gone up in smoke Police officers choked On the same end of the night stick Covered with Louisa’s blood and shit Forty-one shots will not be heard across the nation On your local radio or news station Cause the revolution will not be televised Will not be televised But now a plot has devised To keep your minds in a vise A continuous audio, visual assault on the senses Degradation and violence relentless The revolution will not be covered by Channel 4 or 7 Yet the WB will play re-runs of 7th Heaven As our youth struggle through a life of hell Bonz will be writing war correspondence from a jail cell Incarcerated for rebelling against the overrated theme Of the fallacious American Dream The FCC will monitor the airwaves of BET After slaughtering Tavis Smiley While from majestic mountaintops Jessica Care Moore shouts The words that won’t fit her mouth And the words of Reg E. Gaines ricocheting from plains Will pound in our brains Every time we buy out Sell out To fashion icons Nike and Tommy Hilfiger Making sweaty bucks off showcase niggas "The Revolution (Part 3)" Yet the AmeriKKKan revolution has been televised But the Real World revolution goes unrecognized A governmental, press, and media conspiracy With high officials and news personalities sworn to secrecy There will be a COINTELPRO operation A massive infiltration Into our minds and spirits Photocopies of studied Tupac lyrics As they eavesdrop in chat rooms on Black Planet and Essence Imposter poses at open mic sessions Listening to these words Spoke, spoken In my broken dialect But still yet able to reflect The depth of my intellect As I intercept The 1,000 lies told to keep us in our place With tears streaming down my face For the folks who have lost their soul I issue poetical decrees to make you whole Destroying the matrix design That keeps my people confined In this deceitful dichotomy Infusing minds with truth and clarity Defying defamations of what was said we would never be Revealing the brighter future you thought you would never see My brothers and sisters the Revolution will not be televised But the Real Revolution Will begin as an uprising of the mind Seek the illusive and knowledge you will find To reveal clairvoyant channels vividly Tune in spiritually and intellectually To the Real Revolution.....Life! |
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08-26-03, 03:30 PM | #2 | ||
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hit me up wit sum feedbak ~1luv~
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08-26-03, 03:58 PM | #3 | ||
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hey hun i havent read this yet but your only suppose to have 2 poems going at once just thought u should know
~Tera~ DONT HATE
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08-26-03, 04:19 PM | #4 | ||
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still uppin 4 sum feedbak~1luv~
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08-26-03, 05:57 PM | #5 | ||
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ayo BITCH as i have mentioned to u several times before and like F-i (bllllaat cap like a semi) just sed u can only have two threads on the front page at any one time ur lucky im not a mod or u would have long ago have posts closed or deleted, though i did read the poem and it is nothing like your previous works. I actually liked it i must admit i doubted your depth and knowledge of vocab but this piece was teeming with intelligent emotions though at some parts it seemed dry and or redundant the overall effect was good, one final thing is that the ending was flat and dead your didnt really capture the end but the rest was gortex steps away from the rest of your lukewarm pieces, congrats, 1luv.
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08-26-03, 09:12 PM | #6 | ||
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Nice job, you poured emotion and heartfelt cries into that drop. Congradulations, you brought some heat on this, wow! I was impressed with the fact that it did not fizzle out, usually this type of drop kinds of dies out way too soon. You carried it all the way through, your intellegence was very noticable, and your flow was on point. I really liked the way you exposed our media, too many people fall into thier clutches... I did agree with some of your points and liked the whole peice but some of your references did not sit well with me. I hate to view our country as 'Amerikkka', I feel the few who do act as so, are the minority and this great country with it's problems is still my first chioce in the world. I would love to see a change, but I still give 120% of myself everyday to this country. Good job and keep them comming, just close out the older ones first....
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08-27-03, 02:33 PM | #7 | ||
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Thanx for the feedbak. i was trying to do a topic that not many ppl do. i think i did. but sooner or later crap like this is gonna cum up and no ones even gonna reconize it. but anyways thanx 4 tha feedbak~1luv~
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08-27-03, 04:10 PM | #8 | |
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shit is deep as fuqq baby gurl...............sweet vocab.........mad discriptive...................i would give u a perfect ten.............i wuz feel'n dat piece right thurr.........1ne ma
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08-27-03, 07:52 PM | #9 | ||
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thanx 4 the feedbak.still uppin~1~
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08-27-03, 08:10 PM | #10 | ||
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at least you can spell revolution right....
skimming over... theressome things you cant say if you not black..eminem dosent consider fifty cent his nigga or nigger..both are the same exact word... (then again you might be a black girl from a cail ghetto) after seriously reading.... this makes me wonder..is this really yours..if so I guess everyone has their chance to stand on the podeum and represent...thats what it kinda fealt like reading it..even though it was..ummm quite frankly...long as fuck...well vented though if its yours for sure..wonders if you do audio the rules arent hard to follow in here...if the mods werent focused on the tournament more than half of your posts would be deleted...whats so difficult? your seventeen?! heres something...if you download music check out jean grae..underground version of lauryn hill.. and check out lauryn hill...unplugged and in studio.. she was the best ever for any female and jean's a thugged out version of her but classy as well... honestly....well done if its yours Last edited by Content : 08-27-03 at 08:14 PM. |
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08-27-03, 09:23 PM | #11 | ||
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^^man y do ppl keep sayin if its mine it is mine it took me hella days to cum up wit this shit next thread i come out with will be proper english all tha way so u guyz will stop askin if its really mine but anywayz thanx 4 tha feedbak.~1luv~
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