yeah new song wit goldspun from sc peep this out

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IF YOU LEAVE FEED I WILL LEAVE FEEDBACK ON UR STUFF

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LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, WE HAVE THE NEW DABATOS IN PASTENSE!


I like ur voice on track...u ALMOST sound like a brotha...(daz a compliment)

a lil SOUL to ya voice

but when u hit that high pitch, the SOUL goes...TAH TAH...lol


nice flow though

delivery is good too...maye 1 spot where ur delayed a lyric and it through your flow "off"...Most won't notice that though

the hook is pretty decent...In my opinion, there could have been talking in the background during parts of the hook...some "yea MA...UH...UH huH" <--- that would have set it off proper


Let me do a hook for u sometime man...I'm on this DOPE HOOK SHIT right now


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aight no doubt man.....good lookin

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why...thank you...I know Im good lookin!

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

lmfao ahhahahha yeah.....right

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listenin..ure voice is real dope on this beat...the hook is nice, a lil off key a bit, q's rite u got that soul..how do u mix ure joints???...lyrics are nice..feelin the flow, its hot...presence and delivery is very strong, second verse, beter lyrics, this hot, lol at the biology line, i AGREE!..like the vibe of this joint...this is real nice..9/10..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216199

can u plz rtf?

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yeah i got u in a bit...lol i';mma record a few new jonits

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