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01-22-05, 02:22 AM

~Luciano~

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From: $.W Detroit

Live from Detroit

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..Welcome Live from the United States of Emerica
Str8 outta Detroit City...Fresh Outta Soutwest

.........Itz Curtains

T-R-O-O-P No longer needs to even step foot in tha Booth
Cuz i can get them Whistlin soon as i Approach the Truth
Understand im not an Eagle Rep so no 2 Year Long Flukes
Got Em Blowin Wind like a Baby talkin wit 2inch Front Tooths
Duke please send a Warning to your Squad...that my Brauds
Will send "Pistons" through all ya Guys and Delete ya Entourage
it was Prolonged from the Heart that im Next Watch ya Step
Please Realize Im Affiliated wit More Bars than Johnny Depp
Purchaseing my Vitals and Initals believe me..Money Smart Spent
Yes im Done with Walkin i move wit more Wheels than Clark Kent
It could Get Uncomfy like Small seats occupied by Badly RoundFans
And your Representation a Dissappoinment like Cassidys SoundScans

.....u thought i was gone give u a Chorus....FUk u..im back wit a Grudge
....A Troop give em another sample of wha them Detroit Ni99az talkin Bout

313 Affiliate chix can be found respectable but some have LessMorals
But at all times they stay more Bulletproof than 50 Cents PecTorals
At any given moment they can Commit a Case and have a SpeedTrial
U not Spittin Flame in the Booth unless the Fire Dept on SpeedDial
Im tryin 2 cave in ya Federation 2 end every one of ya Great Chance
Throw u in tha 1 room off Mission Impossible and dare you 2 Break Dance
I Distrubute Ultimate Fear into ya Peers Freeze up any Public Speaka's
... Believe the Feens think actual Gum cum on my GumBottom Sneakas
I dont think u actually Listning or Understanding are u HearingThis?
Pure Hatred towards my City cuz we Produced the only White Lyricist
Try 2 take Grasp on the Shit i den actually had to stand and Sit Thru
these Detroit Lions will take advantage of Cunts and Cats like "The Q"
......U dont want it in the Booth.......Yes im talkin 2 U!!!!!!

Yea i said THE Q's name...u dont like it...See me in tha Lines Bitch Boy

.........Nuff Said...

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01-22-05, 02:27 AM

Sik Wit It

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From: Florida

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Lol...dope shit mayn
your flow was on point here
nice multi's up in there also
the structure was in place
and not like some OM's and
all over the place...but overall
you had a nice drop, keep
doing ya thing mayn.............
nice drop though

7/10

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01-22-05, 02:37 AM

~Luciano~

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From: $.W Detroit

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4sho good lookin out fam......

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1910258

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01-22-05, 04:03 AM

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From: South Central Kali

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not really feelin it, lines was a lil streached

5/10

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01-22-05, 08:29 AM

~Luciano~

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From: $.W Detroit

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your a no body ne way....comment doesnt matter

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01-22-05, 12:28 PM

PayDay

FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr

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From: Flint

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chea...yo...being from detroit myself...i feel this...but yo...it is streched mayne...your vocab is good, but on some of the bars just get right to it...if you go back and fix a few things and make sure things arent streched it will be fire...nah mean...no hate...but overall it was aight...7/10...and dont say i aint nobody and my comments dont count...lol...just sayin...

...nuff said...~1~

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01-22-05, 01:27 PM

Parallel

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From: West, Canada

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not bad ive seen better flow from you troop if you shortened the liens a lil mroe like you ususally do then it would be tight..but tis alright ntohign to great but dont ever take ratings form peopel alrigth its reatdrd even if soemone says your a 5/10 like guranteed did dont listen you probably did a 7 here or even a 2 it depends who leaves feed...but shit just keep doing your thang your good and shit i like the creativty and metaphores you use in each line or bar...very good...then the vocab was alright coulda been better..always soemthign can be better but jsut keep doign yo thang...
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01-23-05, 10:30 PM

~Luciano~

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From: $.W Detroit

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4 sho...lines are stretched...uppin 4 more feed

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01-23-05, 10:33 PM

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I'll rate that about a 6/10...some of the vocab that had to rhyme was kinda basic....but other then that it was decent...nuthing to special.......good drop...

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01-23-05, 11:33 PM

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~Luciano~

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yea dropped diz in under 10 minz...thanks 4 honest shit

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01-23-05, 11:38 PM

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Yea its better honest then D/R shit....but yea work on ya vocab a lil bit but it got better stedily

01-23-05, 11:40 PM

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holla
rep detroit jea!
good peace mayne

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01-23-05, 11:47 PM

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~Luciano~

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4 sho..thats all i kno how 2 do..but i was eazin off the vocab on this one

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01-23-05, 11:50 PM

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TecKnic

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Originally Posted by *Troop*

4 sho..thats all i kno how 2 do..but i was eazin off the vocab on this one

Yea thats good..i mean not "Every Single Piece Is PerfecT" I get bad drops some times....its all good...keep it up what ya doing.....

01-23-05, 11:52 PM

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~Luciano~

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From: $.W Detroit

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4 sho..u got an alias?

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