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08-12-05, 10:49 AM | #1 | |
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WHO? -(Feat Hitchcock)
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............chea its the boss of bosses, Hitchcock. Dont get it confused
WHO?.... WHO?.... WHO?... Its Hitchcock dont think it nigga I put the pen to the page, and what else?, ink it nigga Alotta these clowns got me stressin a lot Thinkin that they all tough wit a vest and a gloc Just Give em one chance and they lettin it pop Sayin they gon come thru and leave a mess in the spot Leave a mess in the spot? naww yall aint speakin the truth Cuz first of all you can't even bring heat in the booth Dont mean to burst ya bubble, leave ya peasants despaired But the last thing you sprayed, just freshened the air I got weapons in pairs, and they not hard to fit in The rap game like virgin pussey, its hard to get in I dont give a fuck where ya studio is, or how it run like Cuz freal, even Nas only needed just "one mic" You dumb tike, sit down,....i bench bitches Niggas know that Hitchock got mo spit than french kisses yeah man....you heard its that nigga man........ WHO?! Wanna get it in a sec and become the next statistic on the net, and tell me WHO?! Wanna try they luck, and turned into a pile of stuff, Nigga let me know WHO?! Wanna bang at the East Coast, like we aint gon let that heat roast, please tell me WHO?! Wanna step to Hitchcock, and merked from the first when the clips pop Point em out nigga WHO? WHO? WHO? Some of you niggas ackin funny, what you lost yall dicks? All underhanded and shit, like a softball pitch Its that East Coast nigga wit the seismic flow I planted the seed of success cuz its time to grow Its time to show, that... i.. got rhymes to blow Hitch after that cake, im trynna get that Heisman dough Im gettin tired of this bullshit, the quality's done So if most yall up and died, it wouldnt bother me none If you seen me runnin up wit the shank, you'd probably run My right arm swing wit, a nice warm sting Yeah niggas im a bold dude Cuz I step on this beef shit in sweet kicks, and call it "solefood" Im smokin coco to the brain, takin photos of a dame Hitchcok too fly , call me a dodo on a plane I still aim fo po-pos on the range In case you didnt know dog my "motives loco" like a train hahaha.....CHEA Hitchcock, the coroner give up for the man WHO?! Wanna get it in a sec and become the next statistic on the net, and tell me WHO?! Wanna try they luck, and turned into a pile of stuff, Nigga let me know WHO?! Wanna bang at the East Coast, like we aint gon let that heat roast, please tell me WHO?! Wanna step to Hitchcock, and merked from the first when the clips pop Point em out nigga WHO? WHO? WHO? ok ok ok ok ok I dont even see you clowns Infa-red on the scope, tell scotty to beam you down(DAMN) Im still duckin from the P.O.'s clown And you know i stay wit a couple Eagles like T.O. clown I dont mind who hot Cuz yall like Friday movies, you get worse every time you drop I could knock you down, one pound at a time My lyric's so deep that you could drown in my lines If ya talk trash, you gon see them things spray And get kicked out this rap park like Free and A.J. (Ouch) Most niggas..., dont even mean what they say Wit out the alphabet you'd never even seen an A-K Im cookin hot, yall recipe's mild Throw a grenade and split ya group like Destiny's Child You niggas can be angels for free Cuz its like x-box, you'd look good wit a "Halo 2" me....hahaha LET ME KNOW WHO? WHO? WHO? WHO? I run this shit mayne, dont get offended get offensive, thats my motto....its +ON-TOP+ records.....shouts to the S.W.A.T Team....no gimmicks man lets do this
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Open Mic's Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One Opposite of Cold= The Cartel Dear Others=Hitchcock Kill That Static=Hitchcock Last edited by Hitchcock : 08-18-05 at 03:56 PM. |
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08-12-05, 10:50 AM | #2 | |
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heres my link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203802
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08-12-05, 11:09 AM | #3 | ||
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IP:
wooh good shit right here man....good shit...very self oriented lol...but a good track...shud be arlly gd audio if u do it...8/10...felt the vibe and the flow...good shit....RTF to
Desperation http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204191 THANKS
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08-12-05, 11:44 AM | #4 | |
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IP:
thanks for the honest feedback, i'll hit you back wi tsome.lets get some more in hered
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08-12-05, 01:04 PM | #5 | |
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IP:
thanks for the honest feedback, i'll hit you back wi tsome.lets get some more in hered
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08-12-05, 02:26 PM | #6 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
ayyo got the mike jones feelin off of this......it was iight nothing special up on vocab and make ur structure more appealing this structure was eye soring yo.....up on that fa real....rtf if u would
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08-22-05, 06:08 PM | #7 | |||
A Life Of Chryme
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same^^ keep it up man i like ya post
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08-13-05, 12:43 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
thanks for the feedback, uppin for some more
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08-13-05, 01:17 PM | #9 | ||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP:
shit was tight...i was feelin this one, good flow iight structure..keep it up man fa real 8/10
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08-13-05, 01:27 PM | #10 | |
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IP:
thanks for the honest feed, uppin for more
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08-13-05, 01:45 PM | #11 | ||
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IP:
aight decent verse nothin really that good jus almost like a freestyle though but it was aight jus work on some betta lines or work on tha delivery but the vocab is aight....for bein that gangsta type and shit but good job man jus keep it up and it was very decent piece....give u a 6.0/10.....keep it up......FAVORED RETURNED.......1......
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08-13-05, 01:47 PM | #12 | |
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IP:
thanks for the honest ffedback, lets get some more up in here
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08-15-05, 12:09 PM | #13 | |
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IP:
thanks for the honest ffedback, lets get some more up in here
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08-16-05, 07:57 PM | #14 | |
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IP:
thanks for the honest ffedback, lets get some more up in here
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08-16-05, 08:30 PM | #15 | |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP:
Ite..I like the complex hook.You seem to have a good idea of what it is you are sayin and all.Some lines were really good,like the Halo 2 one and spray/freshens air one.
But..I think the concept you used was a little bland.Been done a lot.And your vocab was really elementary.Now I'm not telling you to go and grab a thesauras and use exotic words for every line.NO.Just upp ya vocab up a bit...but don't overdo it..Nah mean?Esspecially for this kinda topic..too much vocab is a no.But you can neva make a whole song with bland vocab.And the wording was bad.You know..some words just didn't seem to fit in right. work on vocab and wording and you'll be fine.keep it goin.~1~ RTF PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204095 |
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