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12-01-04, 02:48 AM
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Quick diss to J-poll and Tha Q
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 juss a quick diss track , i aint seen a response yet to "hey i" ..... so i juss put together a lil something ........  dont get it twisted i know all about the quality........ no time for mixing when your recording at 2:30 in the morning.....  "EZ"
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12-01-04, 12:52 PM
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El Padrino
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IP:
links in the siggy to the diss track
first song on the top.......... "ez"
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12-01-04, 01:12 PM
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Tito man, your lyrics were fire...your flow was thorough and i love this beat, good track overall,i dont have to tell you about quality cus you know already,but dope track otherwise fam....1
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12-01-04, 02:37 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP:
^^^Actually, I'd like to hear you explain to him about his "quality".
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12-01-04, 02:42 PM
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IP:
Why do you constantly say that you know the quality sucks...why don't you just fix it. Read a fucking tutorial and fix your fucking quality.
Now....on to the song. Vocals were too loud. I honestly think you could have made this track ten times better if you just lowered the vocals a little and put a little emotion into what you were spitting. Lyrics were ok.....nothing too special. Flow wasn't bad, but you have an unusual way of not rhyming your words at the end of every bar.....I guess some people like that, but to me it just sounds kinda lame. You'll probably just take this as me hating on you, but if I don't tell you what you need to fix, who will? Anyway, you have potential, but it just seems like you're being lazy. Step up to the plate and show us what you really got
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12-01-04, 02:50 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP:
^^Word...good advice...but they voted this nigga "best flow" on RV...crazy...
Tito's flow is awful...he's not on beat and he just seems to not care... Delivery, on the other hand, is a different story...I love Tito's breath control and pauses...those are tyte...and his voice is tyte...he also has good punches... But, my flow is DEF. better than titos.PERIOD. |
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12-01-04, 03:51 PM
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I'm So Punny
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IP:
because he has so many multi's it makes all his punches oh so simple...
i like when deaded me...then if want beef just thread it... I already did...wtf...
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12-01-04, 04:36 PM
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...Jea...
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IP:
i liked tha shit for one reason.....................
...............i hate jpoll too................. ...............i aint got neo beef wit tha q though.............. but oh well......Good drop homie.................................. |
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12-01-04, 04:58 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP:
Quality can be fixed.
Nice drop i have to say.....some punches..made me laugh... Vocals were little loud...Flow could be lil smooth but hey is a diss so it doesnt really matter....nice drop
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12-01-04, 06:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP:
To the homey who mentioned dzk... he lives in the same town as me... dope for real... jus finished a track with him and k nice... be on the look out for that... enough of my self promotion... lol
the track... like the beat....i think ive told u before.. i like your style.. shit is distinctive...can tell its u.. i fux with it.. but ima buy u a mic or somethin.. cuz ur vocals are killin the monitors... flow isnt that bad actually..i feel you should show a bit more emotion when its a diss track.. but all and all this shit was pretty good.. Pz. |
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12-01-04, 06:15 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP:
Overall its not the best the i ever heard you did....i've heard you do better....what program are you using? because if your using cool edit...then well it should be really easy to mix...check the audio assitance page for that it explains how to mix better....well i'd give it overall bouta 7.5/10
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12-01-04, 06:55 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP:
^^^I could help him...but he's so "dope" he should figure that shit out for himself
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12-01-04, 09:57 PM
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El Padrino
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IP:
hahahahahahaha
yea....... qualitys a real "F" bomb aint it? i promise i'll try to mix my next joint before droping it.... and i realy did lower my vocals...... any more and i would probly mute them...... im working on it though..... aint realy been messing wit cool edit except for inserting a beat and recording my vocals and saving the track as an MP3.......... i'll work on my sound quality though for real...... good looking yall....... thanks for the feed back........ "ez"
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12-02-04, 12:22 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP:
your flow is amazing and anyone who says not his mothers a bitch now to the song.you got a eminem flow which is both good and bad flow was dope as fuck nice lyrics good shit overall i can honestly say your the dopest on rv now by that track and theyve been owned check my audio ill post on saturday
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12-02-04, 06:24 PM
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El Padrino
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IP:
good looks FAMO.........
respect the feed back........
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