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12-01-04, 01:24 PM | #1 | |
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This is All true..all of it.. -Indeph you scermed a burn on my right hand..when constantly concealin whenever I might stand..no matter..I'm still here rapping my life away..till the day I die..night to day the true music here..to keep the knife away..I won't touch I sware the shit suppose to fade when I grown up..but its here today..I aint here to wait..I won't gloves..cuts are better then shit that's stuck..the surgery's a big must but money's a fuss..now I gotta work to heal the shit you caused gotta re-build my empire...from the bricks..to walls I'm tryin to heal..while I'm beating..crusified as I Fix the cross not even you can break me..in a Pit to Fall..my hearts default.. no type of love..hate..depression..or even agression.. if this feelings even normal..or if I'm failing progression.. If I'm heading to paradise..of I'm tailing the desert...I'm still nobdy.. ...the truth is..you aint breakin me..no matter who..you are.... ...I'm no longer tryin to forgive..or even remember...who scared... ...I'm done feeling any type of feelings...because the shit too dark.. ...don't expect any others like this..I disposed my bruised heart... remember homie..when LAtings kings chased me..and you left.. me lonely..and My eye was black and blue and left with chroney's.. thank you..for being the wack-up call..to alwasy expect the fonies.. and don't go no where alone..they test the only's...you... the one reason...why my colors now black and blue..GD nation.. I hope I got too you...you put a black ink..on my history book.. no matter..Ink test..like mental pateietns..is what my history looks.. no help needed..and I aint retreating..pain aint a feeling.. neither is that metanl crap..all that cryin and questioning.. now i'm into fact..I see the world through a Scientist goggles.. but I hope soon..the lord will come fog em..its not a good mood.. when beefin with two dudes..who you thought was friends.. they betrayed but now you lose too?.....I'd be happier having I lossed you.. ...the truth is..you aint breakin me..no matter who..you are.... ...I'm no longer tryin to forgive..or even remember...who scared... ...I'm done feeling any type of feelings...because the shit too dark.. ...don't expect any others like this..I disposed my bruised heart...I'm defualt.. I had a girl name pleasant..live across the street to my new place.. but the question was..you would embrase who's face..I was shocked.. you cheatin on me with cop?..its not only illegal the shit immoral.. and you done it so much..you forget its plural..after I went to the floral.. got you flowers..called you every hour..just like you requested.. you seemed damn near perfect truly blessing..why would pleasant.. renounce her love she had for me..if all the shit she said was telling stories.. I should of left her..and went with her friend tori..but I denied her.. the truth is I went with you to put out your fire..don't EVER speak to me again..no apology don't bother me..be with him..no regretions.. like I said I aint mad..nor said..nor any agression..anyone on RV want my Ex..shit its a penny a pleasant...maybe a Chirstmas present.. -Indeph
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12-01-04, 01:32 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
damn........this was good.........i liked the complicated structure......you stuckt to the topic well and imagery was great........i honestly dont know waht else to say other than this was a great piece
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12-01-04, 01:54 PM | #3 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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this was dope good job
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12-01-04, 02:11 PM | #4 | |
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Willa I love you and I made a R&b song for you...
Everysince...I laid my eyes upon your words... I been in love..I work hard.. you what I deserve.. I can have anybody..but you are what I prefer.. ^*cries* from the heart werd
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12-01-04, 03:51 PM | #5 | ||
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damn touchin' piece.good drop.you already know it's hott so i ain't gonna tell ya' again
9.5/10
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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12-01-04, 05:27 PM | #6 | |||
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Hahahahaha Good U Got Beat Down From The Latin Kings............
Chea.............woot Woot But Dis Is Some Dope Shit.............chea 10/10
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12-01-04, 06:07 PM | #7 | ||
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yea it was alright good story an shit blah to tired to explain....
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12-01-04, 07:06 PM | #8 | |
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12-01-04, 07:22 PM | #9 | ||
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stucture i was feelin your stucture and damn you get ebtter everytime to be onest i was feelin this as one of your best ever ive seen...vocanulary was good....the concept was good....damn hot single weerd..9.7/10
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12-01-04, 07:41 PM | #10 | ||
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i like this one it had advanced vocab which is important in raps
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12-01-04, 09:20 PM | #11 | |
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