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killaconcepz | 0 | 0% | |
n'zyme | 4 | 100.00% | |
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01-30-04, 01:12 PM | #1 | |
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n'zyme vs. killaconcepz
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usual rules u spit first g'luck |
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01-30-04, 01:14 PM | #2 | ||
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checkin in.........................................
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01-30-04, 01:25 PM | #3 | |
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check check....waiting on you........................................
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01-30-04, 01:26 PM | #4 | ||
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ayo if I wanted da title trust i could have-in dis' battle i would get in your ass,but word is your a fagat-if da oppurtunity comes to win tou betta grab it-or end up gettin' punched in da face till' you resemble lenny kravitz-believe or not da battle is mines-cause i'm about to blow ya spot up like cheeta's steppin' on mines-cause n'zyme couldn't rhyme even if i offered a lifeline-bout' to be known worldwide cause my flows is intercontinental-bangin' on tracks so hard sometimes i destroy my own instrumental-don't be mistakin' cause i'm new-cause basically in my world i'm Hitler and your the jew-don't spit back it's already ova-but if you wanna win use da tactics of true soulja- or whateva dat fags name is.
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01-30-04, 01:27 PM | #5 | ||
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[QUOTE=killaconcepz]ayo if I wanted da title trust i could have it-in dis' battle i would get in your ass,but word is your a fagat-if da oppurtunity comes to win tou betta grab it-or end up gettin' punched in da face till' you resemble lenny kravitz-believe or not da battle is mines-cause i'm about to blow ya spot up like cheeta's steppin' on mines-cause n'zyme couldn't rhyme even if i offered a lifeline-bout' to be known worldwide cause my flows is intercontinental-bangin' on tracks so hard sometimes i destroy my own instrumental-don't be mistakin' cause i'm new-cause basically in my world i'm Hitler and your the jew-don't spit back it's already ova-but if you wanna win use da tactics of true soulja- or whateva dat fags name is.
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01-30-04, 01:29 PM | #6 | ||
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sorry for mistake, ignore first flow
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01-30-04, 01:42 PM | #7 | |
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wolverine doesn't represent you, b/c u can't connect-a-cut
no shovel needed for this battle, your diggin your own rut here's a concept, look at your verse, fix your damn structure Urine so much trouble from these words i bet ya spleen will rupture watch this kid fall in exhaustion, my heat has got this killa stroked good thing there isn't a license to mc b/c your's would've been revoked wannabe x-men, Marvel at my lyrics, whereas i just find you comical the difference in quality between ya verse and mine is defined astronomical u compiled a verse of run on sentences, threw them into one big paragraph even you found my punches funny but you're just too scared to laugh |
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01-30-04, 01:49 PM | #8 | |
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let's get some votes on this battle..........................................
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01-30-04, 01:54 PM | #9 | |
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N Zyme clearly takes this... more witty punches.. good personals.. structure/flow was on point etc..
Every catergory taken.. Killa.. sort out the structure first.. then try and add some witty personals to hit real hard.. Some decent attempts, but without a good flow your verse was virtually useless... cheetah/spot line was creative.. aim for similar.. Basically a very one sided battle.. For originality, structure, and witty punches.. Vote - N 'Zyme Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110472 |
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01-30-04, 01:58 PM | #10 | ||
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nzyme took this...punches were better, only cuz they existed in his verse...concpz was just wack....n zyme had a better structure too..both had kinda weak rhymes tho...
vote- n'zyme Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
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01-30-04, 02:02 PM | #11 | ||
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01-30-04, 02:26 PM | #12 | |
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uppin for some votes....................1x....................... ........
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01-30-04, 02:43 PM | #13 | |
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don't sleep on this.....................2x....................... ................
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01-30-04, 02:57 PM | #14 | ||
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vote on mine and I'll tell some people to come vote in here..lol
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01-30-04, 03:54 PM | #15 | |
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uppin for the third time....it's 2-0 so far, let's get some more votes....don't sleep
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