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02-12-05, 08:02 PM | #1 | |
Hell yeah
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Did I Elevate?
IP:
just asking,since the last time i posted a song(very long ago) ive listen to alot of rappers on soundclick and did something to see if i elevate,fix the quality since my last songs(if you wanna see what it was like go at the bottom)
www.soundclick.com/xspitty i left feedback on "i rather" x rayvision,something like that and alot more so dont worry |
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02-12-05, 08:07 PM | #2 | |
Whys That?
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IP:
toy soldiers beat is easy to flow to, you could of come alot stronger with your flow. but its on point most the time.
you mumble a bit,clear your throat and speak up. Its real lyrics, from your heart..i like that. Quality is good,could do with less pops and cracks though.personnaly I dont feel the beat you used,simply cause its so mainstream, tyr using some underground beats,that way youll come more original Overall its an ok track.6/10 |
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02-12-05, 08:09 PM | #3 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
iight thanks for the feed,finaly i dont have 4 lol,yah i know the beat is easy to flow on,but i wrott this song when the song first came out
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02-12-05, 11:40 PM | #4 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
comeone uppin,i gave enough feedback,i gave like 15 feedback in a week in the audio forum please
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02-13-05, 10:26 AM | #5 | ||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP:
listenin......toy soldiers beat -easy to flow to
lyrical content is good as is vocab, flow is on beat mostly, good mixture of rhyming schemes...quality is a lot better than in the past but still not that good.. to answer you...yes you have elvated a lot... RTF LINKS IN SIg
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02-13-05, 11:10 AM | #6 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
thanks alot apreciate it...lol yah i like my sig too
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02-13-05, 01:37 PM | #7 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
uppin please...
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02-13-05, 02:41 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
Typing as I listen:
I can't answer if you elevated or not - but the flow was pretty solid. Coulda used more cadence - but that's true of nearly all the tracks I've ever heard on the net. Also, to bring your vocal clarity up - come closer to the mic, it got really clear for liek a 2 second span, then went back into the toilet. Not a bad track - but I couldn't listen to it for more than two verses (if it had a second one) out of the sheer boringness of it. Just dosen't say anything that'd keep me listening, personally. Hope this helped.
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02-13-05, 04:00 PM | #9 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
yah it did thanks
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02-13-05, 07:58 PM | #10 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
uppin this one mre time
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