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06-26-05, 12:56 AM | #1 | |
*Murder Was The Case*
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*Songs of Harlem*...(GREAT POEM)
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Listenin' to some rhythm and blues... songs of Harlem bleedin' through my fingertips... Tender kisses of a somber saxophone, Low sighs of jazz reveries, Flowing like a pleasant scent in the breeze, From some foreign flower, Bittersweet Harlem Blues… Hot friction, quick rubbin’ of caramel fingers, Snappin’ to the rhythm, slow and distant… Tales of harsh streets, cold nights, broken homes, Mama’s repetitious prayin’, To anything that’ll take time to listen… I scream to the sky, Make me stone! No more pain, no more gain, Lovin’ embraces from Loneliness, Abandoned in a desolate confinement, My eternal tomb, Life… 16 miles, my weary legs are still walkin’, Draggin’ down a useless path, Dreams of mirrors, the face lookin’ in, Ain’t mine… I hear the demons callin’, Deep within this tainted mind, Their squeeling violins lurin’ me in… Each shudderin’ breath, I die… A silky whisper of sorrowful poetry, Neglected woes from brown lips, Liquid pain streamin’, through an illusions’ eyes, What’s it’s name? Who gives a damn? Save your sympathies for someone who cares, Stare at the woman next to you, Latina… caramel sweetness… her… Listen closely to this hymn I sing, Savor it, like Sangria wine, Delicious, rollin’ on your tongue: the taste of your lover’s kiss… Bittersweet: memories of a not-so-long-ago past, Clenched fists, hopin’ to find faith inside, Not surprised to discover, EMPTINESS… Sway to the music, That the solemn saxophone sacrifices, The chocolaty poetry the lips whisper, The story that my fingers wish to weave… Songs of Harlem…
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06-26-05, 02:00 AM | #2 | |
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uppin .
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06-26-05, 04:37 AM | #3 | ||
Damn.. Im ill..
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Damn seriously that was deep
nice drop for real.. that R&b lil theme you got on it was Real hot... stay up
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06-26-05, 04:52 AM | #4 | |
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thanks. .
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06-26-05, 09:08 AM | #5 | |
Banned: Biting
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*uppin This Piece. Its A Master*
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06-26-05, 10:18 AM | #6 | ||
Odi et Amo
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Amazing piece in my opinion, read it a few times to fully grasp everything actually. I love your writing style, reminds me of mine back in the day. The way you express so much throughout some simple words, it's just excellent! The vocab was kept basic but that made the piece more powerful and pure in fact. I enjoy how you portrayed different aspects of the topic, how you expressed feelings and situations. You were right when you said this is a masterpiece! One of best poets on here now...
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06-26-05, 10:28 AM | #7 | |
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thanks alot. i really appreciate that now....o man i feel special as hell now...thank you thank you thank you.
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06-26-05, 01:22 PM | #8 | |
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UPPIN MY SHIT. dont sleep
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06-26-05, 08:25 PM | #9 | |
Poet's Daughter.
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Damn.............................................. ..
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06-30-05, 05:03 AM | #10 | |
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fuckin uppin my shit.
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