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06-20-04, 09:14 PM | #1 | ||
i changed my title !!
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accomplishment vs. valor
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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06-20-04, 09:40 PM | #2 | ||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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Check in maine.......
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06-20-04, 11:14 PM | #3 | ||
A Reflection Of The Past
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in....
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06-24-04, 08:58 PM | #4 | ||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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no chances the way this kids late we should up-the-stakes and
let this bitch feel what its like to have breath depravation hard to sleep, verses causin opposites of some good dreams runs in da family, so fubu pants only way you got hood jeans you winnen, battle me and lose kid thats whats expectided like rabid dogs, in uptown apartmants, known to wreck shit this fag screamin he had enough, so i bring more to ya fuckin homo blows harder than country-wide orchestras didnt feel like spitten alot
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06-25-04, 05:01 AM | #5 | ||
A Reflection Of The Past
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This Cats Gay Worry's More Of Having A Ja'rule Body..
He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?..(sig) Your Rymes Cant Make Sinse Even If Your Verse Was Done.. Ur Wack,and Have Me Saying I Have 99 Problems But This Bitch Aint One.. He Comes With Weak And Shitty Rhymes And Thinks Hes Authentik.. Ur Rymes Aint Intelligent,so The Crew A.I Are You In It.. He Didn't Feel Like Spitting Alot,dude's Going To Pay The Cost.. So Go Back And Tell Your Crew How You Spit 8 Herbish Lines And Lost.. Blah Didn.t Feel Like Spittin Alot...rofl
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06-25-04, 07:29 AM | #6 | ||
bingo!
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accomplish ment is in my crew.. however im voting against him...
accomplishment you didnt come hard at all, you used some shit lines such ass: no chances the way this kids late we should up-the-stakes and let this bitch feel what its like to have breath depravation Bad opener^ your whole verse had choppy flow.. overall 6.4/10 valor.... you had bad structure good* flow you used a bad line... however you flipped it and used good wordplay on the second line:This Cats Gay Worry's More Of Having A Ja'rule Body.. He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?. ^^ you put in that personal you came harder so in my book you won ovrall.. 7.0/10 my vote valor for just coming harder and throwing muh more personals and punches v/valor accomplish ment is in my crew but im voing against him
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06-26-04, 08:19 AM | #7 | ||
i changed my title !!
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breakdown for accomplishment:
flow:flow was working nothing too complex but solid 7/10 volcab:average nothing really to say 5.5/10 puncheS:some alright lines nothing too direct though not the best i've seen from you 6/10 overall:18.5/30 breakdown for valor: flow:alright nothing better then accomp 7/10 volcab:average array 6.5/10 punches:a couple of lines that were more direct still nothing too special though my fav,"He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?..(sig)" i give 6/10 overall:19.5/30 pretty close vote--valor good battle though
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06-26-04, 10:53 PM | #8 | ||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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LOL.........vote accomp for not feeding. I could have swore that was one of your rules dirt. Why is there no DQ?
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06-27-04, 11:03 AM | #9 | ||
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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Agreed git that shit poppin, i'ma pull a l.i. on di sbitch
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