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01-22-06, 11:33 AM | #1 | ||
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Im So Fly>>>>>>>>RemiXed>>>>>>>>>>>New Shit With Trakk Starr!!!!!
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www.soundclick.com/unf Yeahh!!! Im So Fly Lol Unf's Feed LAC-Sesame Street Freeverse http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220095 Trakk Starr's Feed SpuL-Gimme That Ft.Chris Brown http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2627573
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01-22-06, 11:51 AM | #2 | ||
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Beat: Tight, obviously
Flow: Tight Delivery: Deece Quality: ->young: decent, could be better ->trakk: better....pretty tight Overall, its a decent track...pretty good umm....Young, i dun wanna state the obvious, but ur quality is lacking...prolly ur mic tho...so, no worries and Trakk....seems like u kinda lost ur flow on the second round of the hook, seemed rushed to catch up to the beat....jus my opinion good shit, keep it up
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01-22-06, 12:02 PM | #3 | ||
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LMAO@U Sayin My Mic IS Lackin
My Qual's Better Than His,I Got A Condenser Mic But Yeah Aighh
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01-22-06, 12:12 PM | #4 | ||
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beat dope word.
hook is aiight if that what you start with..... vocals need to be upped. like I seriously can't hear you yo. but your flow there, voice coo. can't hear many lyrics, what i hear seem coo. good delievery. track, voice coo. vocals need to be upped to. delivery coo, could be upped more. emoiton coo. Lyrics nice. Like the beat stops you guys put all throughout. lol nice touch. Hook in end i can actuallyunderstand haha overall, pretty solid drop. both came coo. both elevating. keep it up. pc.one. RTF UNF if you could, thanks track for feed: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220184 |
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01-22-06, 12:16 PM | #5 | ||
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Thanks I Will Rtf...Dont Worry
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01-22-06, 12:54 PM | #6 | ||
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upped............................................. ........................
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01-22-06, 02:31 PM | #7 | ||
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nice track, 8/10 keep it up Pz
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01-22-06, 02:58 PM | #8 | ||
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01-22-06, 03:20 PM | #9 | ||
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upppppppppppppppeddddddddddddddddddddd
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01-22-06, 04:39 PM | #10 | |
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always liked this beat
hook i liked it catchy unf im liking ur voice now lyrics fit the track pretty dope for a club track trakk u sound like le soooo much lol my uncle is an iron worker lol lyrics were pretty good feeling u saying the hook better due to sound reasons unf is kind of high overal 7/10 liked this alot better than the last collab
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01-23-06, 02:20 AM | #11 | ||
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^^Thanks........
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01-23-06, 08:28 AM | #12 | |
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I like the melody of the beat...but the beat itself is a tad repetitive
has a club like feel to it...I can imagine this playin as you 1st enter the club...then you start shakin ya junk as u walk through the door With that said, your lyrics are lackluster UNF flow is fine presence is good Carl Lewis, I mean Track Star ur voice is good...ur mic was straining...u need a new one...lol flow is decent at best lyrics were decent at best did u say REDICK?...OMG, like, TOTALLY! please leave the valley girl --ish out next time lol...j/k decent track home boys THis would be a banger with better lyrics 1 |
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01-23-06, 12:10 PM | #13 | ||
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Thanks...I Was Rushed,I Had To Go So I Quickly Put Summin Up
Upppp!
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01-23-06, 12:22 PM | #14 | ||
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hook nice.....flow is good....lyrics nice 2 good track! |
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01-23-06, 12:54 PM | #15 | ||
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Thanks.....................
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