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Old 12-05-05, 06:16 PM   #1
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Fathom This & Devin vs. Diligence & Blackmage

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Topic: Devil's dance
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Old 12-05-05, 07:00 PM   #2
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Check And Damn This Is Goin To Be Dope This Is A Dope Topic

Lol 50 Lines Damn Yall Can Do That If Yall Want Ha Im Lazy
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Old 12-05-05, 07:36 PM   #3
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Damn... Dope topic.

And uhhhh........ Check.
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Old 12-05-05, 10:20 PM   #4
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checkmate...........
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Old 12-05-05, 11:13 PM   #5
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Checkmage...bitches...yea...yea yea...yea...yea...
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Old 12-05-05, 11:32 PM   #6
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i............................am................... .................not.............................. ........a......................................... ...................bitch

*runs off crieing*
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Old 12-06-05, 05:38 PM   #7
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yea really my shit's almost done, concept dope as hell and mad vocab, story gon wrap yall up
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Old 12-09-05, 01:44 PM   #8
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May I request an extension until Saturday Midnight or is this too long?

I havent been in touch w/ devin for a day or two and I need to chat w/ him to see if he is finished and all.....
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Old 12-09-05, 04:45 PM   #9
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Extension Granted
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Old 12-10-05, 01:52 PM   #10
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Word thank you..... I'll have that up most definetly.... Hope they show too so its not a no show!
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Old 12-10-05, 10:50 PM   #11
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wtf?? they aint even gonna drop....... Should I even bother to drop?

I'll leave some feed on other verses... but..... They apparently arent dropping
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Old 12-11-05, 12:03 AM   #12
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(Let's play a game, i get a pitchfork, horns and sin
you can run you can hide but i promise i will win
in this game i can twist your soul but don't complain
once again i have a pitchfork, i can pick you or your brain
don't dare ask god for help, that's 2-1 it's not fair
but shhh there's nowhere really to hide from the ground to air
from the freezing northpole to the surface of the sun
wanna play wanna play, ok get ready, set, run....)


(I sold myself to satisfy his greed, he cheated on me
to make him as powerful as a boss, he started beating on me
now he's gone, you got me good but i will get you this time
as much as i look different, you can't tell your face from mine
switch my hair, add glasses new lipstick i'm different people
i'll beat you this time, you're bad...you've never met sh-evil)

SHE WALKED IN, SAT LOOKIN AT THE PICTRURE IN HER LOCKET
CONVINCED HE WOULD SPEAK IN FLOWERS HE PUT ONE IN HIS SOCKET
HE TRULY SPIT FIRE, HE PUT A BLACK ROSE IN HER POCKET
(She'll out think me, she's from the projects that's nonsense)
may i help you, I want a deal for my soul" Sure
I want my husband back the contracts here, intentions pure
HE READ IT WITH DEMON SPEED no loopholes too
nothng good can ever come from having a mob boss as a boo
Ironic now he's a ghost(Evil laugh) sorry that wasn't funny
actually it is but at least you've got your power and money
i loved him, i'd give an arm to have him back in 1 of mine
(Could use a backscratcher though...) rather a soul just sign
SHE SIGNED AND HER MAN APPEARED FROM SMOKE AND DEBRIS
HER SMILE TURNED TO A LAUGH ALMOST PERPETUALLY
SHE WIPED HERE FACE, UNDID HERE HAIR i sold my soul for his greed
then again to make him a boss, I think you're slippin D
you thought i didn't recognize you, you'll get it eventually
what comes to mind first, ready, incarnation
...(gasp)...re
LOCKED IN A MENTAL TANGO HE DIPPED HER WITH EASE
Eternity's a longtime child, let alone 3
read the fine print i sold you the same soul, I know
Picture yourself as a plate in the guise of a broken bowl
that's reincarnation shaping the same soul
, your awfully naughty
keep reading, your only prize is the soul of this mind and body
FRANTICALLY SCREAMING I still get one eternity
You look like you swallowed fire, too bad no one's burning me
with your ego you bought a car before checkin to see the spare
and with your haste and impatience found the engine wasn't even there
the day i married my man i gave him my spirit and love then
that day i gave my mind, body...and soul ot my husband!
This can't be i am...i..am Looks like a loser to me
SHE TURNED AND WALKED WITH HER LOVE IN HER WAKE
BUT TURNED AND SAID in all your life that was the best joke you could make
.................THEN SHE LEFT..........
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Old 12-11-05, 12:16 AM   #13
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Devils Dance


Slow sweet music plays as 2 individuals dance side by side..
Hands clasped together, he leads her as she follows behind..
Temperature rises and passion is felt in every humble swing..
Bullets of sweat forming, as flames engolf everything..
The young man appearing weak but mind is strong yet evil..
Young lady appearing stable, her mind is holy yet so feeble..
He burns with an inner fire to unleash hells unforgiving wrath..
She lives to purify his soul, try to direct him on the right path..

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His Backround

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Born June 6th 1906 at 6:06 on a Friday morn..
Darkness set forth unto his mind when he was born..
Listens to Death Metal and his favorite color.. red..
He embodied a nasty fetish, seeing things amongst the dead..
From age five he acquired a nitch, he enjoyed playing w/ fire..
Set his Kitchen ablaze along with his expensive cookery attire..
Growing up he abused drugs, simply he just didnt care..
Had only 1 passion, he would dance to dark music, anytime, anywhere..

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The Dance

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Swiftly sweeping her off her feet, kissing her tender skin..
Letting his mental spirits take her over, transformation begins..
Amongst fire they dance, eyes fixed upon one another..
Devils Dance ending slowly as the fire smothers..



When Living your life you have to be strong,U cant Be Feeble..
Because the devil is always watching,weather its good or evil..
We all start equally no1 is ahead believe me we all have an aqual chance..
Buit then people make some wrong decisions and the devil begins 2 dance..
I knew A dude named brian an A student but then he did bad n fell..
Now hes don under while the devil is dancing and torturing him in hell..
He did some bad thing and he tought oh its was along time the devil 4got..
But the devil forgets nothing and form that Brians in the Melting Pot!..
People thing its a joke, but they have no idea the powerd the devil holds..
Then they Praise him Thinking he'll like em then the truth Unfolds..
The made him dance and they tought they made him haooy n Proud..
The would scream Spells using all they knopw and shout em out loud..
You must not dance with the devil do wats wrong evryday all the time 24/7..
then youll be in a happy afterlife instead of hell ull be in the gates f heaven..
You must foll9ow the rules be nice dont driink while driving dont kill a man..
Cuz if u think otherwise and do wrong yuoll be i the Devils Hands!..
The devil is evrywhere dont think you can leave or 4get or Escape..
Cuz hes watching when your drinking Driving, or planing to Rape..
So do the right thing be smart Hearffull Smart And Clever..
Cuz in the worlds of immortal T a dance with the devil might last u 4ever..


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2nd verse - Devin
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Old 12-11-05, 12:20 AM   #14
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lol I didnt think you would drop! cool.. now atleast we can get votes...

uppin!!!
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