4 bars/ 8 lines..
..No gay votes
g'd luck.. 1

I'll drop today..

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.Aeral. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 04:27 PM.

..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 05:53 PM.

Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard..
He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job..
No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader..
He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper..
Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b...
Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c..
Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb..
Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen)

~1~

Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky...
..& he's an exponent??
...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI
You'll go broke but this is not the great depression...
could cut off ya left hand...
............& still couldn't leave the right impression
Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick...
...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist
Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove
I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love

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your in/ urine.. don't get the punches, go play with yourself...

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky...
..& he's an exponent??
...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI
DECENT OPENER
You'll go broke but this is not the great depression...
could cut off ya left hand...
............& still couldn't leave the right impression
PRETTY DECENT
Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick...
...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist
NO……
Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove
I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love
HEH, DECENT CLOSER


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Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard..
He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job..
DECENT OPENER
No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader..
He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper..
NICE PUNCHLINE
Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b...
Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c..
DECENT PUNCH
Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb..
Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..
DECENT CLOSER

overall I think Ex came a little harder
cuz Aeral skrewed up on 1 line…but
anyway Ex gets my vote on this 1

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7 Day Theory

Voted For: ..Exponent..


Ex
Good Structure Nice Going, The Flow Was Tight, Still No Rhyme Scheme But You'll Get It Sooner Or Later... Add More Punches And Personals, Multis And Metas...Good Verse Dopeness......8/10


Areal
First Off Your Structure Was Fuck It Was Chatoic I Couldnt See Where Your Bars End, Those Dotted Line Wasn't Working. Add More Punches Personals Came Weeker You Can Do Better, Mutis Was Needed Here Too..................................

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

exponent........
Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard..
He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job..
lol....shit actually made me laugh a lil bit....7/10

No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader..
He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper..
hmm....didnt like it too much....didnt hit too hard 3/10

Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b...
Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c..
Decent....work on wordplay some......5/10

Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb..
Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen)
ok personal.....2nd line wasnt too great.....5/10

Aeral.......
Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky...
..& he's an exponent??
...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI
hmm ok opener....ok meta.....6/10 (could have been worded better)

You'll go broke but this is not the great depression...
could cut off ya left hand...
............& still couldn't leave the right impression
didnt like the first line....2nd line was ok...5/10

Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick...
...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist
not feeling this at all....didnt rhyme well.....2/10

Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove
I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love
sex jokes are played........3/10


exponent.....20/40.....decent...could have came harder but i guess you didnt have to....i felt like his punches hit harder...his structure was better.....overall it was just a better verse...

Aeral......16/20......couple of bars were played....couple of lines were ok....practice being more consistent.....

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i meant to say aeral was 16/40.......lol not 20............my bad

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lol, was his verse that good.. & goliath?, I think you're Zeke, some dickrydin huh?.. whatever, idc...

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Voted For: .Aeral.

Good battle overall

Aeral had bad structure...Ok flow not bad at all...Punches where hitting most of the time...Vocab was aight...Personals where pretty good...and ya Multis where not very good...Overall good job to you

Ex had a better structure...pretty good flow...Had alright punches seen better from you...Vocab was aight...Multis was not there....and ya personals where weak...pretty ood job not bad seen better from you

v/Aeral

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FREE AGENT

Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......

return the favor: Coopa Bang vs 3x.............Coopa Bang vs KKKHater.....Coopa Bang vs Ike.....thank you and have a nice day

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FREE AGENT

Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......