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12 lines

is that cool

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1610931

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1610935

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Naah keep it 10...

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WHAT EVER

FUCKIN LAME ASS BATTLES

10 lines it is

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LOL^^^doesnt really matter .....2 lines less to lines less to read for the people.

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IS the verses due Friday?

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Yo son With one punch dummy, you'll do nothin but run from me
I'll push your wig back till ya scalp gives me it's lunch money
Infact you bitch, how much more violent does It have to get?
He laughed in the face of danger, and it fuckin slapped his lips
Bars are batterin givin you a headache & brain cells splatter
You’re a comic book junkie/slash childs play, photoshop master
A rtifcialy I nceminate ya vision I hope the BLUR'S gone,
You the BITCH walkin around wit a 'I'm a Net Legend' shirt on
He tried to pass but he left with his pride just smashed sl FUH Q
Your whole style's a pimple short of being classified as ass and thats TRUE

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k..dv said he might be late......

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*ahem....Wonderin how he got so many wins an cant drop decent shit..lol*

1st I'll stack this kid organs on shelves leaving his stomach up set..
56-9? To me u still a rookie In-side so how u rocking A core vet?..
Truthhurts son,getting me on ya roster is the only way u'll make a vote..
Sayin"Eat My Shit"?? C'mon I got Seamen that'll rape ya throat..
U think u dope? wit yo d/rs ring just straight Neverous, im serious!..
U got less chance of giving birth to hiphop then 13 year old virgins period..
Ok enuff let's end the quarreling now, we should bury-the-hatchet..
I should get out of the business of embarrassing this faggot..
Punchline king? your not one..all multi's and no real insults..
U already tried to make pens halt..but drops wack shit on impuls...

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*Am not explainin my punches, just look in his profile..lol*

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ice pick~yea your verse was aight now when doin text i highly rank on punches an vocab now you had some punches but they were kinda blan no wordplay wasnt feelin alot of tha punches you were throwin at dv you had a lil vocab twords the end of the verse your structure was kinda choppy but not that bad....

DeadlyVision~your verse was betta then ice picks cause of your punches an the way you set them up thats very important vocab was aight structure was good had some personals in their overall i liked your verse an thought you had more punches an personals thats why i'm giving this battle to you....vote deadlyvision

this battle was a little disapointing seeing these were both vets dropping but DV had more consistency in his verse cause Ice Pick's drop didn't have very many hard hitting punches and his wordplay was so-so.He had a good line about lunch money but the line that set it up wasn't very consistent.Ice's flow wasn't too bad and his structure was pretty good I guess.With personals,he had some OK ones like the photoshop master line but apart from that,nothing special.
DV-your verse was superior in everything including punches.Most of his lines were personals,and his punches hit pretty hard.His flow was great and his structure basic but good.I was expecing much more from both but overall,DV's verse was more 'vet-ish'.

V/DV

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Yo son With one punch dummy, you'll do nothin but run from me
I'll push your wig back till ya scalp gives me it's lunch money
hell no
Infact you bitch, how much more violent does It have to get?
He laughed in the face of danger, and it fuckin slapped his lips
nope. played.... and a bad flip
Bars are batterin givin you a headache & brain cells splatter
You’re a comic book junkie/slash childs play, photoshop master
kinda good... made me chuckle
A rtifcialy I nceminate ya vision I hope the BLUR'S gone,
You the BITCH walkin around wit a 'I'm a Net Legend' shirt on
um..... no
He tried to pass but he left with his pride just smashed sl FUH Q
Your whole style's a pimple short of being classified as ass and thats TRUE
nope

1st I'll stack this kid organs on shelves leaving his stomach up set..
56-9? To me u still a rookie In-side so how u rocking A core vet?..
eh... no
Truthhurts son,getting me on ya roster is the only way u'll make a vote..
Sayin"Eat My Shit"?? C'mon I got Seamen that'll rape ya throat..
eh. kinda
U think u dope? wit yo d/rs ring just straight Neverous, im serious!..
U got less chance of giving birth to hiphop then 13 year old virgins period..

Ok enuff let's end the quarreling now, we should bury-the-hatchet..
I should get out of the business of embarrassing this faggot..
no

um....

vote the guy i gave a smiley face
Punchline king? your not one..all multi's and no real insults..
U already tried to make pens halt..but drops wack shit on impuls...

[QUOTE=sdizzle]Yo son With one punch dummy, you'll do nothin but run from me
I'll push your wig back till ya scalp gives me it's lunch money
not feelin
Infact you bitch, how much more violent does It have to get?
He laughed in the face of danger, and it fuckin slapped his lips
ehhh...ight
Bars are batterin givin you a headache & brain cells splatter
You’re a comic book junkie/slash childs play, photoshop master
boooooo
A rtifcialy I nceminate ya vision I hope the BLUR'S gone,
You the BITCH walkin around wit a 'I'm a Net Legend' shirt on
punch=no
He tried to pass but he left with his pride just smashed sl FUH Q
Your whole style's a pimple short of being classified as ass and thats TRUE
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not feelin this verse....6.5/10

1st I'll stack this kid organs on shelves leaving his stomach up set..
56-9? To me u still a rookie In-side so how u rocking A core vet?..
nice set up...played punch
Truthhurts son,getting me on ya roster is the only way u'll make a vote..
Sayin"Eat My Shit"?? C'mon I got Seamen that'll rape ya throat..
lol funny...decent punch
U think u dope? wit yo d/rs ring just straight Neverous, im serious!..
U got less chance of giving birth to hiphop then 13 year old virgins period..
nope
Ok enuff let's end the quarreling now, we should bury-the-hatchet..
I should get out of the business of embarrassing this faggot..
bad closer

overall not very god either....but better then Ice's, more enjoyable and punches were a little better...overall 6.8/10

Vote-DV

v/dv

ice pick only had one bar that was actually a punch in my eyes while dv's whole verse was, and thats word

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