These are my first two beats ive made so check them out and give decent feedback, need to improve.......

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/sethlaw_music.htm

the vineyard: i really liked the song. just mix it a little better. like turn down that snare a LOT. but overall, very, very nice track

noise: was that the same bassline in the back??? eitherway, this song sounds like "switch" part 2. i don't know if that is a complement or not. it's not a bad beat though. keep it up main

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ok, thanx for the feedback man.....

The Vineyard .
Nice work . liked the speed, the flow and the feeling of this track.
i agree with Skitz 119 turn down the snare.
keep wit it yo . well done

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ok thanx fir the feedback, anymore......?

the vineyard - its coo, sound like some Roots type shit. kinda hot on some mellow funky type shit

noise -nahh...scratch that, this shit is iight, but its just repititive.

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ok thanx for the feedback

noise: Kinda the same pattern looped over and over. not much mix up. The clap seems too quick and too regular too. Not bad for one of your first beats, and the background noise is kinda original. Wasn't really feeling it - but it wasn't the same old same old.

The vineyard: Snare seems hella plain. Tweak that shit cause it sounds like its your basic fruity loop snare and sounds very thin (thin = plain, computerish, etc) Mixup the guitar riff, and this sample would be alright man. Oh wait - I like how you dropped it there for a few bars. Nice.

Yea - these aren't bad man - keep droppin and if you need help - holla at me.

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nice one thanx for the feed