10 Lines
You spit first
No Feeding
No Biteing
No Recycling
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes

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What up its Envee checking in... Yo ILL whats ya sn??

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Yo yo,

Peep

I called this kid out and he wouldnt drop unless i came 1st....
He like a dogg his flow is "Limp" witout "Buiskits" but he aint no Fred Durst...

Im bout 2 add this "Head" to my signuter labeled "Ripped In Passion"...
Call this battle math cause my rhymes "Whole Numbers" urs are "Fractions"....

Call this kid a "Ghost" but dont trip u aint close "2 pac" missin like ya profile....
Illunatic to this "Hole" battle is like a pre teen pregnate bitch stickin wit denial..

Imma have u "Runnin" and ill get a KO over u cause Envee is "Disrespectin Ya Lines"....
Call Envee, 2pac kid cause i can only handle bitches like you "One Day At A Time".....

This kid juss got "Easy Baked" juss like mac and cheese in a microwave...
Sorry ya aint ill ur rhymes need work like ya girls hairy cooch needs a shave....

lmao i dunno dawg quik key up... U rushed me and told me 2 do it 2day so u wont forget.. aight go!

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thats a really newbish structure it needs to be fixed as soon as possible becuz you wont win many battles like that..ur flow was good and ur punches were nice sepite ur structure..i think u won this battle easily in my oppinion...but both verses were bad... really lame bttle fo'sho overall *5*

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Aight go ahead and contest the best, but I wouldn't suggest
I've read your shit before, and i'll tell you I am not impressed
I'll tell you this you stand correct, from the words of ya sig.
Explained it good, ya did! You're just a "Motherfucking Kid"
Accepting to battle me is like asking for yourself to lose ya teeth
I'll slap you with a mic....
....wrap the cord around a throat, and watch you gasp to breath
3 Months since I last battled, you aint shit to come back too
You been gone too, i'll make you returning debut. "Envee's back"...."who?"
You're wack dude, I wont bother to check this battle, your that screwed
Infact dude, i'll give you props..........
......................I wont be that rude. Fuck it, let this battle conclude


Fuck it.. i haven't done text in 3-4 months... that was a keystyle

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ur structure was better than his.. but only by a lil.... your rhymes scheme honestly sucked big balls......... ur verse was just all around bad...i was feelin it... ur punches wernt hitting hard.. quite honestly i didnt think u had one personal in this verse thats why envee wins overall 4/10
my vote envee

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DECENT BATTLE...

illunatic-ur verse was okay,ur punches were good,u had a nice looking structure,and i thought i seen a personal in there also,ur verse flowed decent,and u had nice word play....so u had a very good decent verse for not text battlin in bout 3-4 months,not bad

envee-ur punches were okay but a lil to simple,u had no wordplay really it wasn.t good,u did flow pretty good though,but u also need to fix your structure,so i say elevate on your structure...and a lil more on ya punches...you will get better

v/illunatic

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/\ LMAO dawg tha 1st bar i had was word play....

Uppin' 4 votes....

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envee hands down

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Finally someone sees tha wordplay and tha punches i threw lmao...

Uppin For Votes!!!!!

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i know I cant vote but i think illunitic won this

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So the dont say nuttin fuckin newbs

Uppin

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ILLunatic took this in all caigories espicly punches cause thay were a good amount
vote/ill

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lmao..i like envee's punches...quite funny...u need to work on ur vocab and ur wordplay...lol..i like da cooch shaved part..hah..but umm..

illunatic..yea i dont really think u came back 3-4 months really give you an excuse..but i like ur wordplay and talkin about envee's about his comeback..lol..funny shit..well this battle was fun to see illunatic had more personals in his lines also .. but umm this is how it breaks down..

opener: envee
punches: envee
personals: illunatic
multies: none
wordplay: illunatic
flow: envee
structure: ill
vocab: none really
vote: illunatic

ayo..can yall vote honestly on my battle heres the link:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132254

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iunno man.. that was aight to be you just commin back and everything, but wordplay goes pretty much hands down to envee.. and flow is envee.. hmm, structure is ill, punches, i think goes to envee to, cause his were more complex.. i think im going to have to give it to envee by a hair or less...

v/envee

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