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03-10-04, 07:38 PM | #1 | ||
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My Story (Trilogy)
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My Story Part 1 (The Beginning) Fear is inevitable, for you cannot tempt the barriers of your feelings. Am I living for a purpose? Or am I living only to protract my sadness? Prevaricators are all that I believe. Who will tell me why I am here? Using my intellect to verbally express my feelings. All I need in life is a paper and a pen. For I can control my expression. Criticism and ridicule is what I get for trying to love. IS life worth the fight? I’m not sure I can make it to the end. In need of a revelation, or someone to love and depend on. Will I make it? For day by day I weaken and corruption fills my body. Valiant feelings, but my limit is coming close. I fear my end has come. My Story Part 2 (The End) The essence in my life has stopped. What once was so great has ceased to flow. I cannot comprehend the demand of my peers. I can’t contain my pain. Indecisively alive. Am I ready to die? For I no longer have anything to live for. Unpretentious pain, but it is a feeling I cannot explain the horror of. Living life people left behind. I am forever trapped with my past experiences to haunt my mind. A barricade of hatred is defending me of true love. Can I brake free? My greatest fear, has become my greatest joy. I am an artisan of poetry, for it is what keeps me alive. But I can’t answer my thoughts; the pain blinds me from the truth of life. I now believe that this gun to my head is the answer to all my problems. My Story Part 3 (Born Again) As the gat takes the shot, my mind has cleared. I have no feelings; Nothing but an empty space to be filled. God has given me a chance to relive my mistakes, to set my wrongs right. I am blessed to have lived life, but I know I made mistakes. Forever I will be guided with love and kindness, to reflect on my inner being. It’s time to relive. Time to live the life I once hated with so much feeling. Ready to die, ready to live. I am eternally in thanks to the people whom I have loved. It’s time to rise. I’m through with pain and sorrow. I will turn over a new leaf. The Lord has distributed me a life with love. No longer shall I fear my own feelings. Will this blessing last?
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03-13-04, 07:07 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
good poem nice structure good emotion n vocab keep droppin
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03-13-04, 07:08 AM | #3 | |
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IP:
o forgot
...............fav part................... Indecisively alive. Am I ready to die? For I no longer have anything to live for. Unpretentious pain, but it is a feeling I cannot explain the horror of. Living life people left behind. I am forever trapped with my past experiences to haunt my mind. |
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03-13-04, 07:43 AM | #4 | ||
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IP:
Nice work.
Touched me.
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03-13-04, 03:26 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
Why thank you
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- P.O.E.T. - Philosiphers Of Everlasting Thoughts
!I got more PUNCHLINES than STICK FIGURE BOXING! |
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03-24-04, 03:33 AM | #6 | ||
....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP:
great structre great topic great story
great poem... one love..... |
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