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02-13-03, 06:14 PM | #1 | ||||
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MConcise - You cant catch us (My Verse)
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Please do not say "this is way to short". If you would read
the title you will notice it is only my verse! Its not a fucking song, its just one verse. Its just the rough draft, did it real quick sittin down with no pop filter. Sounds pretty dope though! http://concise.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/44061 http://concise.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/44061 http://concise.dmusic.com ^For other tracks and beats by Concise. Please vote and leave comments too! Cise
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02-13-03, 08:29 PM | #2 | ||
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Cise Is Back Aha!
Flow Is Pretty Nice, Lyrics Are Nice Quality Pretty Nice, Pretty Nice Verse pZ.
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02-13-03, 10:46 PM | #3 | |
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not bad g, flows quite tight words sound a bit scripted....nice verse tho overall......ElavatE
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02-14-03, 01:23 AM | #4 | ||||
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Thanks yo..
And to jae.. Lol ya I aint spit in a while. Im mad rusty and just tryin to elevate. Good looks.... Cise
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02-14-03, 01:33 AM | #5 | |
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Flow is presty solid the beat nice and shit of course the lyrics are solid the delivery still needs a little work keep at it.
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02-16-03, 08:16 PM | #6 | ||||
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Thanks, up
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02-18-03, 11:20 AM | #7 | |
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Yo it wuz stright dogg.......You need a lil work tho....You gotta put more.....like feeling into iT....Like really mean wut you say........It's jus somethings missing......i thinks its tha Flow.....Tha lyric's were stright.......na-mean.....jus work on dat flow and They way you deliver dem Barz.............
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02-18-03, 11:48 AM | #8 | |
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yo
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yo, this joint was pretty cool...i just say the only problem is how u try to stretch a few end rhymes to conform to the beat...just simply add in a few more words so your bars are precise wit the beat...other then that, i like how the clarity sounds...very good quality yo...holla back...
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02-18-03, 07:06 PM | #9 | ||||
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Thanks for all the feedback yo! I will take it
and see what I can do with it. More feedback is always welcome. Thanks.. Cise
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02-20-03, 11:40 PM | #10 | |
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Dog, that was pretty nice. I like it. I can't wait for tha audio battle.
First, delivery was on point 80%. A little more umph in tha voice, sound wise, would of made it worth while. Your voice is very nice. It sounds like u was making love 2 tha beat. Thats what u wanna do to a song. Fukk Tha Shit Out That Song. Tha beat made it all though. But, there really is no buts. I just think you verse should of been longer. U left me hanging. Don't leave me hanging on tha audio battle. Hottness Overall 8 out of 10 |
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02-21-03, 12:49 AM | #11 | ||||
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Thanks for the reply. And I will "leave you hangin"
in the audio battle. Hehe! Cise
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02-22-03, 04:28 AM | #12 | ||||
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Thanks for the feedback and peepage. I am currently
uploading the full version of the track, with verses from Lucid and Endovidual (Mind). Nothing special, but I just produced a beat for us, we have studio time on sunday at 2:30. Cise Closing this thread since the full version is up...
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