This is a collab. Venomiss & Addlib

She is my gurl and has just sighned up to RB so you will see alot more from her

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Veno

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I like it.... It shows a lot of emotion and thought..
Makes ya wish everyone had somethin like that,
untill the end were everything slipped away .......
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Yeah, when were workin it aint about girlfreind boyfreind attitude. when we write we write as artist's.

Thanx for the feedback

pretty nice collab...

The flow was awesome...from like short lines then long then longer ones...nice to read..especially the alternate type ish...

this piece was really self explnatory like how 2 ppl adore each other so badly that they expressed it in a very artistic way....

like every lines were really unique and the rhyme scheme changed from the beginning to last ...

how the way u structured and elaborate the piece showed the true passion from each one of you...props for that

concept was really good...nice drop

..and yeah addlibb we gonna watch out for ur gurl...drop more hott ish...

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It reminds me of relationships I've seen before. They start out good and then kinda..die down, I guess you could say, cause of lack of communication or something like that. Ok, enough of trying to sound smart.

You 2 fed off eachother real good. Like, one person would write a verse really good, then the other would take that and go a little further. You made a good team with writing this. I always like reading collabs.

All of it was really good. Can't say much more than that.

^thankyou

Hello Addy Babe, i finnally got round to registering

A new breed of femcee has arrived....lol

much love to all who check this piece

I hate plagiarism. I have no idea who adlib is but i happen to know the people who wrote this poem and it aint this lyin heiffer or no muthafuckin addlib. "Venomiss" needs to str8 get her stealin ass stomped. Not only did she steal the poem but she stole the name right down to the sig! Her sig doesn't even make any damn sense because everyone who knows the venomiss she stole the name and poem from is also called Ma. Just copied every damn thing without even thinking. This is just why I don't believe half the people here write there own shit.

a new breed of emcee alright...SHARK!!

Yo man, this chick needs banned for postin other peoples works....I know who wrote both of these poems...I know who the real Venomiss is....and this aint her...