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11-30-04, 01:03 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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-20 Cigarettes Left-
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stressen sum shit keyed up... [Chorus] stressen only 20 cigarettes left pressin 2 puffs every 1 breath stressen only 20 cigarettes left pressin 2 puffs every 1 breath stressen only 20 cigarettes left pressin 2 puffs every 1 breath life's suspenseful no education dont have the credentials... take pride in the essentials one nation under this pencil... intellectual minds speak lies at lectureal times... america body central men freak size get cut down by war mines... words spark the image capture speak with no hesitation... lifes a scrimage im awaiting the rapture paper wraths the ventilation... vividly witness all this..as i sob all americas conflict... decent living?then explain why you cant make a earnin if your a convict... i want my fam tight like this pack of cigs is completely cohesion... same problems different season why?..just gimmie a deeply reason... [Chorus] stressen only 20 cigarettes left pressin 2 puffs every 1 breath stressen only 20 cigarettes left pressin 2 puffs every 1 breath stressen only 20 cigarettes left pressin 2 puffs every 1 breath |
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11-30-04, 02:42 AM
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#2
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
bump...........
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11-30-04, 09:25 AM
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Better than you..
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your dope at this mate. that was a short verse but seriously ill. flowed well, vocab was nice, you were on point and i was feelin this. this is the kind of shit i read and think how i can improve my own shit. dope shit....keep it up.
feel free to leave feed in my own OM linked in my sig. feedback is always very much appreciated. onesky
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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11-30-04, 12:52 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP:
definately a ill drop.short but damn good.vocab,structure,flow all good.10/10....
keep em comin'
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11-30-04, 06:51 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP:
9.5/10 nice.............................................
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...Done Wit The Games...
...Time to Get On My Grown Man... |
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11-30-04, 07:24 PM
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#6
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
What up man,this was dope as hell, great flow and vocab, kinda like a song,it was intense, i really felt this a lot, i was upset it ended so quick..lol
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11-30-04, 07:30 PM
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#7
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
lol thanks fluid apreciate tha luv...........
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11-30-04, 08:04 PM
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#8
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...Jea...
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IP:
good shit...r u gon make dis into a song or not (cuz it has a chorus)...ne way.....good shit and keep dropping em, i would have to give it a 9/10..........werd!
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11-30-04, 10:23 PM
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#9
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
bump................
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11-30-04, 11:14 PM
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#10
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP:
good read, a bit short however.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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11-30-04, 11:18 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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blah you suck,...you suck .SUCK SUCK SUCK..!
... ..MY BALLS... LOL.NICE DROP YO,............8.5/10..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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12-07-04, 07:10 AM
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#12
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
uppin..............
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11-23-05, 10:32 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP:
you wack bitch......
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11-24-05, 01:29 PM
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#14
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IP:
Closed
No links and introspects banned
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