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Troop | 0 | 0% | |
Mike Hawk | 4 | 100.00% | |
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12-16-04, 11:56 PM | #1 | ||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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13. Troop Vs. 21. Mike Hawk
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Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time 12 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck! Troop Has Gotten For$aken's Seed Of #13 And His Spot In The Tourney Since For$aken Signed Out... I Didnt Want A 3 Way Match So I Switched Troop's Seed.
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12-17-04, 01:08 AM | #2 | ||
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Merk Squad.........Nuff Said
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12-17-04, 04:01 PM | #3 | ||
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here we go again.......
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12-19-04, 01:09 AM | #4 | |||
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Troop... Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck? Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do
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12-21-04, 01:51 AM | #5 | |||
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........This time its Personal This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na? 12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz 2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz? 12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With? ....Its Nuthin.......Nuff Said.. Read his Sig. look at his Avy....Explains It all
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12-21-04, 03:37 AM | #6 | |
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Troop a little hint for you... Dont put explanations at the bottom of your verse... It offends the voters as to you saying they are 2 stupid to figure out your punches...
But yeah this was a good battle i will edit my shit with the vote when i come back online... Just wanted to give troop that little hint Oh yeah one more thing... Mike what the fuck is up wit your verse...? Why did you not rhyme your shit except for your closer... kinda stupid if you ask me but umm yeah like i said ill edit this again when i get time Last edited by led poetic : 12-21-04 at 03:41 AM. |
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12-21-04, 01:00 PM | #7 | ||
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pop lotty:
Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off ^^decent personal 6/10 You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck? ^^i liked this it was kinda basic but it hit hard 8/10 Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you ^^decent 5/10 Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance ^^decent 5/10 Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers ^^your dopest bar good meta's 8/10 Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do ^^ decent 6/10 overall : 38/60 (63%) troop : This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats ^^ good opener 7/10 Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na? ^^ why the heeta and teena just say heater/heata and tina decent 5/10 12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy ^^decent personal wack set up 4/10 Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz 2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz? ^^wack 4/10 12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted ^^your dopest bar 9/10 Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With? ^^dope closer 8/10 overall : 37/60 (62%) vote: Pop Lotty
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12-21-04, 07:50 PM | #8 | ||
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Pop Lotty
Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off best opener lol-- 8/10 You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck? hard hitting, coulda been worded better 7/10 Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you nice…. 7/10 Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance decent.. 6/10 Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers c’mon Mike Wack… 0/10 Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do aight closer.. 7/10 35/60 ~58.3% Troop This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats vocab-centric, but aight….. 6/10 Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na? best line in your verse.. 9/10 12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy worded badly, eh 5/10 Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz 2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz? c’mon Troop.. Wack 0/10 12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted lmao nice one… pretty good.. 8/10 Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With? this was an aight closer… 6/10 34/60 ~56.7% It’s clear that Troop had the vocabulary in this match.. Too much is unnecessary, it throws off your flow and doesn’t help when you try to deliver a hard hitting punch.. Your best line was the one about Mike battling Ike with the connection to Tina Turner which gave you had the upper hand for minute, u had nice multis and analogies (metaphors) I have noticed, but u tried to get too technical when it was not necessary which messed it up for you.. Not a bad verse but some un-useful lines in there.. Mike, in a similar situation, you had sum wordplay but no multis.. You had the better flow and your vocab wasn‘t stretched.. Both of you had nice structures. Mike took this because he had harder hitting punches in his verse…. Vote/Mike Hawk
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12-21-04, 09:48 PM | #9 | ||
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ahah@that Tina Turner line you, woulda been sick if you worded it better
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12-21-04, 11:01 PM | #10 | ||
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Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off ^Nice opener Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do ^Decent closer Next… This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats ^……Decent Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With? ^No… MH took this one
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12-22-04, 12:10 AM | #11 | ||
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your not even in the voteing council...ban this ni99a
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12-22-04, 02:33 PM | #12 | |
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Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck? Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you Vs. Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na? 12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With? Vote: Mike due to a better overall verse troop you had vocab but your punches just wasnt working |
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12-22-04, 02:45 PM | #13 | ||
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mike hawk won that shit
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12-22-04, 03:53 PM | #14 | |
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Closed. Mike Hawk wins 4-0.
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