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01-30-06, 12:56 AM | #1 | ||
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2. N.Tavarez vs. 3. It's SPuL
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Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time. 28 Lines. No Recycling. No Biting. No Feeding. Good Luck.. Come Dope. |
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01-30-06, 07:48 AM | #2 | ||
I see dumb people
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check goodluck hot. word
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01-30-06, 08:11 AM | #3 | |
hotshh!
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check in GL spul.....................................
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02-03-06, 07:48 PM | #4 | ||
I see dumb people
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word 3rd spul-hotshh match up in 3 KORV's. illy yo. gl Hot....
mic check... 1,2.... I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked You might have your key to victory... ...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked! It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit This kid's out of his mind.... .......................................and I don't blame him for losing it! Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether... .................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts! Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces You must be feelin' pissy... ................................. the way urinal of the wrong places! You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these I'ma lay this kid flat out... .....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace! I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done Cuz my rap success is buildin'... ................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one! You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude I'ma peace out this puzzle... .....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you! |
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02-03-06, 09:45 PM | #5 | |
hotshh!
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gl spul
aiight #3 rank, aka dr.punchlines aka john cena aka reckless ESPY is a sports award , dont get it, ask me aiight lets go 2-0 against this kid I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth....... Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog) Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame How UMASS so many losses since then........... ........................The college team's hanging its head in shame You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said? So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding............... ..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room |
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02-03-06, 11:28 PM | #6 | ||
I see dumb people
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upppppppin' this for votes......... ~_~
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02-04-06, 11:24 AM | #7 | ||
Moderator
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I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit This kid's out of his mind.... .......................................and I don't blame him for losing it! I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether... .................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts! Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces You must be feelin' pissy... ................................. the way urinal of the wrong places! My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these I'ma lay this kid flat out... .....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace! Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done Cuz my rap success is buildin'... ................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one! You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse vs. Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth....... Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame How UMASS so many losses since then........... ........................The college team's hanging its head in shame Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room Alright, so this battle was close as hell. SPuL came with a pretty good verse. Some of the shit was still played and not hard hitting like they key / locked out line. But, some of it was pretty dope. He came with quite a few nameplays, and I thought a few of them were good. Hotshh started out slow in his verse. I remember thinking like, it was ten lines in and he only had 4 lines of quotables. He started picking it up though. He did have a lot of older wordplay though. Like, address / a dress, outstanding / out standing, mass (short for Massacheutts) / preachers.. shit just wasn't fresh. Hotshh! still came with some good shit and that line about SPuL battling himself was dope even though it wasn't worded into a massively hard hitting punch. That was just one of those shits where you post the link and it speaks for itself. UMass shit was cool.. Just, an overall pretty nice verse too. So, what it came to me was quotables and SPuL has them in favor of 8-7. He gets my vote. Dope ass battle though, for real. This shit could go either way. Vote - It's SPuL |
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02-04-06, 05:19 PM | #8 | ||
I see dumb people
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aiight thanks for vote..... upppppppp
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02-04-06, 09:27 PM | #9 | |
I Hurt.
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I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth This line was terrible So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked You might have your key to victory... ...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked! okay, but played It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match Really corny, no punch to this So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit This kid's out of his mind.... .......................................and I don't blame him for losing it! alright i guess Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference not really a harsh diss I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether... .................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts! not a diss really, just a statement Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight lol, i laughed, but this is still not a harsh punch You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces You must be feelin' pissy... ................................. the way urinal of the wrong places! I seen this shit before, yuck You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill pointless shit is played My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these I'ma lay this kid flat out... .....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace! okay wordplay, you could have made a good punch out of this, but ya used it wrong I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race again, okay wordplay, but no punch to this Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done Cuz my rap success is buildin'... ................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one! seen lines similar to this one, also not really a punch You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse very stretched, needed rewording... kinda played but okay Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude I'ma peace out this puzzle... .....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you! no punch to this vs. I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around address shit is played, but ya used it well Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars no punch to this Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs smokin' shit is played and hitting bases is played, but actually the way ya used this concept was quite nice Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors Similies just aren't that harsh And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly Needs rewording but not bad Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports also needs rewording but not bad I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment pretty played I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth....... Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog) If there's wordplay in this, I just don't get it Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame How UMASS so many losses since then........... ........................The college team's hanging its head in shame ah man, this concept is ill, but you fucked it up. Still okay though You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights okay attempt for a personal, but isn't that harsh really Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said? So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs just too basic and nothing harsh really Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since good concept, not worded that great... if you had said like "Why does it seem Commercial breaks from it seem to last forever?" just hits harder That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding............... ..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash outstanding shit is very played, sorry And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room pretty decent Hmm, here's the way I see it. Spul, I haven't read your stuff before really so I don't know if this is your usual style. Sorry if my criticism of your stuff was so harsh, if someone likes your style I could see them enjoying your verse, but I just felt like your verse was corny and like I was reading off a joke site. Hell, you probably got some of your shit off of a joke site. To me, rap battling is more about being harsh than funny and your shit wasn't harsh. I've also seen almost every line you used before. Hotshh, you were very inconsistent. You had some tight concepts like the Umass one, the closer was okay though I've used something similar to it before, commercial shit was okay, mortgage line okay, rest was kinda played, guess you just hadn't seen them before but yea i have. This battle I think could be close, depends on what kinda verse you like. I felt Hotshh!'s verse was pretty average, some nice shit and some eh shit, and spul just came with a lot of corny jokes. Vote - Hotshh! |
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02-05-06, 01:39 AM | #10 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth haha, didnt git it at 1st, but then i did, aight opener So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked You might have your key to victory... ...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked! lol, aight It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match ehhh So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit This kid's out of his mind.... .......................................and I don't blame him for losing it! gittin out of sumthin n losin it r 2 different thangs u silly girl Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference haha, thas aight I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether... .................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts! that wuz pritty nice Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight lmao You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces You must be feelin' pissy... ................................. the way urinal of the wrong places! lmao You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill aight My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these I'ma lay this kid flat out... .....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace! nice I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race lol, n spul wants 2 put hiz weiner in hiz buns, ohhh Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done Cuz my rap success is buildin'... ................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one! lol, aight You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse haha Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude I'ma peace out this puzzle... .....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you! i dont git it VS I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around haha. although that cursed shit could b considered feedin, scence spul sed bout cursed, but i dont think it should b Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars ehhh, i think i git it, lol Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs i dont git it at all Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors haha, nice And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly ehhh Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports ha :S I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment fuckin ill I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth....... Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog) haha Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame How UMASS so many losses since then........... ........................The college team's hanging its head in shame niiice You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights ehhh Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said? So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs lol, but dam i hate it wen ppl ryme hed wif legs n shit like that Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since ha That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding............... ..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash lol And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room lmao, nice closer aight, i wuz expectin betta frum both. spul, ya shit wuz funny, but like, a stupid kinda funny. corny ass shit, lol. N. Tavarez, i wuz expectin ALOT betta frum u... alot of ya punches werent even really punches, 2 me anywayz. whoeva wins this iz gonna have 2 come alot harder in tha final round. both yall shit wuz just like "o hehe" but i wanna see shit thas gon make me go "ohh shit! hahaha" nom sizlaxin? werd
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02-04-06, 08:17 PM | #11 | |
Jack The Ripper
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tomorow.........
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02-05-06, 03:46 AM | #12 | ||
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So it's...
1-1 Vote up fucks.. |
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02-05-06, 10:23 AM | #13 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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ROFLMMFAO
how tha fuck did i fogit 2 even say who i vote fo? lmfao, shit v/spul, werd
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02-05-06, 11:43 AM | #14 | ||
NO SURRENDER
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I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit This kid's out of his mind.... .......................................and I don't blame him for losing it! Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces You must be feelin' pissy... ................................. the way urinal of the wrong places! You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these I'ma lay this kid flat out... .....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace! Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done Cuz my rap success is buildin'... ................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one! You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse VS. I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth....... Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog) Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame How UMASS so many losses since then........... ........................The college team's hanging its head in shame You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding............... ..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room 8 to 12. Hot came more creative here, spul came better in past rounds and seemed to fall off a bit here. Good battle. V./ Hotshh.
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02-05-06, 11:50 AM | #15 | ||
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Battle is tied at 2-2..
Vote up fucks.. |
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