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09-27-04, 08:30 PM | #1 | |
My Dick Stay Wet
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One man.....think about it.....
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*****One Man*****
One man with one idea.............................................. ............. one plan of salvation for the whole world,all nations..................... long gone is discrimination,could it happen with 1 man?................ would it take 1 man 2 pursue 1 goal 2 solve all problems for 1 world or would it take 1 world to solve all problems for **ONE MAN**..... feedback on this please.......... |
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09-27-04, 08:30 PM | #2 | |
My Dick Stay Wet
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can i get feedback on this please.....
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09-27-04, 09:14 PM | #3 | ||
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confusing but good..
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09-27-04, 09:27 PM | #4 | |
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you're the 1st man ever on RV to drop a actual poem lol everyone else jus dropped one verse songs nice
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09-27-04, 09:37 PM | #5 | |
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thanks for da feedback niggas......uppin on dis poem yall...........
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09-27-04, 09:53 PM | #6 | ||
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this was good, i wish there was more too it, because it was interesting, nice vocab, i liked it a lot....pc
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09-27-04, 09:55 PM | #7 | |
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Fluid i saw ur pic
YOU FINE AS HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is all
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09-29-04, 12:13 PM | #8 | ||
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waddup good poem u did a good job at makin me think too lol n that dont happen that often hommie so keep it up
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waddup gangsta!?!?! R.I.P. Isaiah Ryder 7/11/82 - 2/26/04 tell all my people i'm a Ridah nobody cries when we die we outlaws let me ride until I get free I live my life in tha fast lane got police chasen me-Tupac |
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09-30-04, 12:31 PM | #9 | |
My Dick Stay Wet
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thanks all.....uppin uppin uppin
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