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09-15-05, 03:55 PM | #1 | ||
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"I dont wanna be right" - Intermental
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Tried alot of multies here, song is summin for the ladies to chill to..
www.soundclick.com/intermental top track: I dont wanna be right http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2438472 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207685
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09-15-05, 04:03 PM | #2 | ||
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Wow, will leave proper feed later prolly but man props, you mad elevated on flow and quality sinse that whitelight diss!!
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09-15-05, 05:07 PM | #3 | ||
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^^^^Lol that wasnt too far back was it, thanks btw and thanks for leavin feed soon
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09-15-05, 05:12 PM | #4 | ||
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*listenin*
o.k beat = one i was gonna use....LOL nice beat flow - good here man on point mostly apart from ya loose it slightly 2nd verse vocals - could sometimes be slightly clearer but its still pretty gud in this area lyrics - pretty nice like you sed man gud song to chill to, so gud layed back style here presense - cud improve it slightly man but you have elevated alot no doubt overall - good track man, good listen, keep droppin pz watch out for a new track from me and AC 'welcome to the uk' kid thanks
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09-15-05, 05:14 PM | #5 | ||
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Ite thanks homie, will do ill peep it asap
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09-15-05, 05:25 PM | #6 | |
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yeah nice flow, love this beat, the quality is weird i dunny why, this is your best seriously, lol the chorus is dope, what song is this?, anyway the emotion is really dope u elevated on that, overall nice track man, u gotta feature on my mixtape def lol anyway lyrics are pretty dope, flow is dope once again.
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09-15-05, 05:34 PM | #7 | ||
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thanks dawg i rlly apreciate that
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09-15-05, 05:37 PM | #8 | ||
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you need to show better emotion, your voice stays normal the whole thing almost, you need to get more of a agression. flow aint to bad, slips once n awhile. quality aint to bad could be upped a lil, in your 2nd verse you mumbled way way way to much and the flow was mad off, 2 totally different verses.
anyway not bad. 1
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09-15-05, 05:48 PM | #9 | ||
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uppin............
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09-15-05, 06:32 PM | #10 | |
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Vocals Was Cool Here Man..Not To Loud Not To Soft
Lyrics They Was Cool Here..Show More SMotion In Em Though Flow Nice Put Some Rhyme Scheme In Here Fams Beat Alright Beat Was Nice Man Keep This Up Yo Some Nice Shit Here.
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09-15-05, 09:43 PM | #11 | ||
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wuddup wit ya rv cats makin these layed back and lubby dubby tracks..this aint too good homie you sound like a stalker sendin a female a very petrafyin message..lol this aint my typa shit man plus you mumbled yo ass off on the second verse..step it up be...5/10 1ne..
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09-16-05, 04:25 PM | #12 | ||
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Ite man feed is feed thanks
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