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11-02-05, 07:53 AM | #1 | ||
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If I Could.......
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If I could ask that one question Would I be ready to break the mirrors of my conceptions If I could lift and fly Could I put down the other things in my life that get me high If I could see what was right Would I still be blind with sight shruggin off whats lost in fright If I could stretch and be free Could I reach the me and release him to you to cease the beast If I could win the biggest war I’d be wagin the costs of my sins to try to feed the poor If I could right a million wrongs When im feelin strong then could I write one tear in a million songs If I could dream past my eyes When im wide awake then could I fall of to sleep and fast my mind If I could take full control I’d put fate on hold and check the locks on the door at the gates of gold If I could have another birth What mother would endure the hurt screamim my pain before im earthed If I could warn the masses Id have to outlast the lashes from being an outcasted blasphemes bastard If I could start and finish Id get my wish and explain it all before I diminish If I ….. |
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11-02-05, 08:06 AM | #2 | ||
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This was well nice Sen,.. really nice reading which flowed really well..
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11-02-05, 08:31 AM | #3 | ||
Within Eternity's Wither
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meh.................its iight i just don't like the form, the way you have it laid out
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11-03-05, 01:37 AM | #4 | ||
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just uppin for some feedback
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11-03-05, 01:53 AM | #5 | |
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gay...
i hate this inner feelings emotional type shit...this is RAPverse not EMOverse...
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11-05-05, 03:53 PM | #6 | ||
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uppin
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