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04-15-10, 11:32 PM | #1 | ||
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prob best song i ever made
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tell me what u think lyrics r in da video
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04-16-10, 01:14 PM | #2 | ||
the real man of steel
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its ight not bad but flow is a little choppy at points
keep at it
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04-17-10, 06:57 AM | #3 | |
Addicted
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hook was a little bit decent other than that u sound young,i guess the only thing positive thing was the hook, u kind of flowed with the beat,sounded kind of manotone, and sounds like u didnt dub your vocals,but overall no hate not to burst your bubble but wasnt feeling it..
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04-18-10, 07:36 AM | #4 | |
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some of the lines were noticably stretched out...i wasn't really consistantly feeling the flow in the verses too tough, i mean it sounds like with a bit of work you will definitely get better but just not quite there at the moment. the chorus was ok, that was probably the best part of the song. keep at it
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04-18-10, 08:07 AM | #5 | |
I don't lose
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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