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alright
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o.k nano it striaght but don't be kissing my ass just playing dog keep it up and u could do better
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thanx man jus getting warmed up aight
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ok
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this was aiight
nothin special i think the wirtten structure is what took away form it real hard to follow that shit when it's in paragraph form feel me? anyways man keep postin |
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You need to elevate.....dont put it in paragraph form, line on top of line works much better and it helps with the flow.....work on better content as well....your concept was ok but i think it could have been done better.....but elevate and keep at it man.
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Flyweight
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yo, too much "n" word and bad words. Thats what makes you flow sound tight.
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This Was Horrible
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