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05-26-04, 03:55 PM | #1 | ||
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<<"Pleasure & Pain"... A poem for da Ladies...>>
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“Pleasure And Pain”
Can I call you Baby? See, I don’t really care what your name is. Could give a fuck what your momma calls you. I wanna call you Baby. I wanna make your life painless and make your future promising. I wanna make you climax in stages of emotional bliss until your heart beats skip and your sex drive throws fits. I know what you’re thinkin’: Who in the hell is this nigga talkin’ all this shit? Well, you can call me “Pleasure And Pain.” But, right now I’m just the verse on this page tryin’ to get deep inside the depths of your mind. Is that okay? Coz if it’s all right with you I’d like to take you on a cruise around the universe of infatuation. Escape the dimensions of your problems and prepare yourself for sentimental emancipation. Baby… I can call you Baby, right? I could give a fuck what your daddy calls you. I wanna call you Baby. I wanna put this “Pleasure And Pain” all up in you until you scream my name. Let us spin on the axis of desirable stimulation with nothing but an aura of attraction to show our affiliation. Your presence deserves not a single distraction. The floor is yours by divine right. If men were lost you would be their guiding light. Now, you can call me whatever you like, but I’m known as “Pleasure And Pain.” But, for now I’m just the verse on this page soaking into the depths of your mind… Is that okay…?
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05-26-04, 04:01 PM | #2 | ||
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Yes That Is Okay.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Most Deff, lol
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05-28-04, 05:06 AM | #3 | ||
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^^lOl... I'll hold you to dat!
Uppin this shit...
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06-03-04, 06:16 AM | #4 | ||
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Damn, is anyone else gonna read this?
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06-03-04, 04:04 PM | #5 | ||
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I Own Think So lol
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06-03-04, 06:15 PM | #6 | ||
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thats a hot spit. you got the ladies feelin all hot and bothered.
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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues! A.I.
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06-09-04, 06:34 AM | #7 | ||
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Up...
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06-09-04, 03:19 PM | #8 | ||
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haha mack daddy man i think the girls r gonna get to wet to even read this just from the title
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06-09-04, 03:25 PM | #9 | ||
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MayNe Don't Even Trip .. lol.. I Aint Wet .. 'Exactly Yet' ..
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06-09-04, 04:08 PM | #10 | ||
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dis was ko..nutin speacial...but nice in places..work on mulits and deeper poetic techs...
nice drop 4/10
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06-10-04, 11:16 AM | #11 | ||
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^^Multis??? This aint no fuckkin Rap verse it's a Poem nigga... Poems aint even gotta rhyme... Fuckk outta here wid dat shit...
And at DangerousMind... Shit... Poetry aint da only thang I'm good at gurl!
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06-10-04, 06:01 PM | #12 | ||
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Well..... 'Details' .. Work... Please Do Tell....!!!!!!
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06-17-04, 09:30 PM | #13 | ||
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Your poem was tight. I don't really think that certain gurls will like to chill wit you though. It sounds like all you want is to f*ck em, or was that your intention of writing it? Hah, Nice work though
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