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01-28-05, 01:56 PM | #1 | ||
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HopesFall vs Melancholy
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01-28-05, 02:39 PM | #2 | ||
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Check....good luck to you....
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02-01-05, 01:46 PM | #3 | ||
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uhh, i wasnt aware until today, i will have it in by tomorrow 2/2... so it will be one day after, im sure you will see to it that i am granted this.
Granted...Melancholy also has an extension
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02-02-05, 01:43 PM | #4 | ||
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“Janine’s Cage”
By: Hopesfall External illness with an internal mindset, this kindness, Doesn’t come for free, here for eternity, I’ve grown spineless, It fires on all cylinders, my composure completely bursts, At emotions worst, happiness shifted into reverse, --- She smiles, teeth shine for miles, I sit down next to her; I’d be here for a while, She takes my hand and places it on her thigh, It confirms my, emotional high, Hearts shattered by the chorus of screaming, My rage is gleaming, it’s Janine, Cut was my heart, untold was the pain She came to where she left me… …A rose in the rain, Would her darkest of nails… …Be pushed through my wings again? I lay alone, on the floor I was slain, Trapped in a cage, labeled with her name that morrows, It was her, the root of all my sorrows, I gripped my chest, in a mesmeric way, And thought back in the night as I did in those golden days, She blissfully twisted; I stepped and said to Janine, The words that plagued her, like smoke from Methanphetamine, I pierced her chest with words; it had to be done, What she did to me was like peering, into the barrel of a gun, “You Get Under My Skin, Even Though My Mind Is Thick, All In All, My Message is That, You Make Me Sick…”
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02-03-05, 01:42 PM | #5 | ||
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he no-showed.... so i win.
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02-03-05, 04:11 PM | #6 | ||
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Hope 4 hoe show
ya drop was ok wasent wha i exspected from all the shit u talk u need elivate on that use more emotion ya wordplay was witty but the way u delivered it seemed like u knew he wasent gonna show so u jus half assed hope thats the reason it looks like that...the flow was choppy and the structure was horrible up that pronto kid *Nuff Said*
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02-04-05, 12:02 AM | #7 | ||
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Fuck...could I get an extension on this? My mom died, so thats why I havent been on in a while...I will drop tonight.
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02-04-05, 01:59 PM | #8 | ||
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*Dumps on her dead face*
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02-04-05, 01:59 PM | #9 | ||
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no... i dont care if your mom died... just think of her with a mouth full of dirt 6 feet under... but anyway, i know i did that in like 20 minutes the night before, and i quit for a while, so i am just starting back again. And i knew it wasn't good, i just ddidn't feel any emotion at the time.
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02-04-05, 04:14 PM | #10 | ||
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Hopesfall wins by noshow...sorry if thats true melancholy but i doubt it...if it did happen im sure you wouldnt be on here asking for another extension
Hopesfall +3 Melancholy -4
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