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Old 02-16-04, 12:42 PM   #1
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Eki Eki Eki.. *shakes head*.. You've got much to learn kid
My votes didn't lose you that battle.. your verse did!
Talk about dumb.. you actually thought you had won?
Fuck I ain't your father now.. I'm disowning you son!
Did you bitch about every other loss on your rec?
His verse was so vacant you'd think he lost his neck
Honestly kid.. no one gives a flying fuck about you
Your family perhaps..
..But when I asked them they had doubt too!
It's sad.... And what makes it even worse
Is your open mic diss was doper than your battle verse!
Sit down kid.. shut up.. let me shoot some truth into you
You're wack.. horribly herbed out.. and that's just in general to
If you want I can get deep and reveal all your embarrassing secrets
But you did that yourself the minute you showed that weak text
It's funny kid.. that verse I dropped took me 2 minutes to write
Yet you'd have a better chance of beating me if you were More dead than alive!

Bitch.
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Old 02-16-04, 12:53 PM   #2
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You got him better than he got you...

Your punches were witty and on cue and you were creative with them all. Structure could be improved but.....who cares

Nice diss...

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Old 02-16-04, 12:58 PM   #3
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Thumbs up, Token my man...

Nice fire back...

I like the way you jotted it with so much blah...

And still herbed his ass.

Funny shit.
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Old 02-16-04, 12:59 PM   #4
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not bad...
seen better seen worse
had about 3 punches maybe 4 which hit him
rest was more filler
not really been battling for awhile..but u seemed to have done alright here
and im too lazy to quote..opener was a good intro..

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Old 02-16-04, 01:23 PM   #5
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aight dat was sup good shyt token, lol nice ass diss better than edicius, structure was off and flow was aiight, but besides dat i'd say u took the beef, lol yo check out mah collab,,,http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113746
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Old 02-16-04, 02:52 PM   #6
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Thanks guys.. I'll hit yours up when I can.. right now I'm trying to beat 24/7 mode in ESPN Basketball.
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Old 02-16-04, 03:34 PM   #7
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This was a good lashing on someone….
I can tell you had anger lol.
Good disses ok punches.
Kept a steady flow, and some good personals
Over all a good verse for the mere fact you lashed out
At him….well done…
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Old 02-16-04, 06:06 PM   #8
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Good diss..alot better than his verse..that's for sure...one question..who is Eki???
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Old 02-16-04, 06:22 PM   #9
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Ekis the kid who dissed me.. and Now I see he had the vaginal lips to reply back. What a homo.
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Old 02-16-04, 06:24 PM   #10
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comeon Token.... dont be using such vocabulary... there are little kids around who look up to you
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Old 02-16-04, 07:44 PM   #11
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^ Apologies.. Didn't think it would offend you.






Owned.
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Old 02-16-04, 07:46 PM   #12
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yeh i though i could predict that shit 1-0 to me.. predictable.. and i though u were wittier dont you see i winked?
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Old 02-16-04, 07:52 PM   #13
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1-0 to you?

This diss was doper than all 3 of your wack ass verses combined herb.
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Old 02-16-04, 07:54 PM   #14
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ahhahahahaha yes Token. Thats right. <--noticeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Old 02-16-04, 07:56 PM   #15
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"This diss was doper than all 3 of your wack ass verses combined"


^^^ True Story
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