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03-09-04, 09:20 PM | #1 | |
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Audio Draft.... "Death is Lurking"
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this is just the first part of my audio piece "Death is Lurking"
I'm looking for constructive feedback... Death is Lurking Styles P beat- My Life Verse 1: Down The road of death Where the grim reaper is met Head down, hood over, both hands are set Send weaker pants of breathes 8 decades and 59 months now I know…. The 9th wonder is death And my chest…. More solidified Than war kernel vets Veins halts I my left atrium The bells drop like a gymnasium Its hard like titanium Wicked thoughts within my cranium My Death is Lurking My eternal Bed is Emerging My thoughts are Surging Shall I leave in bliss I hope Im missed I got some last words And it goes like this…. Chorus/Hook: Oh No! I’m losing Health! My family, my friends, myself when I die my spirit will belch ill be right over ur shoulder… in stealth (See me?) feedback..... |
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03-10-04, 01:48 PM | #2 | |
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dont sleep...
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04-18-04, 09:12 PM | #3 | |
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test
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