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05-16-06, 10:25 PM | #1 | ||
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When ya Eyes Close (Shear Kahn + Loose Logic)
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228181
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2744424 track that me and loose logic did a whle back...its up on his soundclick because hes the one who mixed it in the studio... www.soundclick.com/looselogic scroll untill you see "when ya eyes close" leave feed and well you know
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05-16-06, 10:36 PM | #2 | |
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helps if you move tracks up when you feature them
beat is coo 1st cat...flow is good...lyrics are coo pretty solid...nothing out of the ordinary there Hook is decent...no real "hook" phrase in it though...not bad 2nd cat....delivery is good...flow is good...lyrics aren't too memorable on this one though Solid sounding track fellas 1 |
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05-16-06, 10:39 PM | #3 | ||
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Logic is tight, great voice with a solid delivery. He has a great style of writting, good lyrics. His flow is pretty good and the hook he did was pretty tight.
Khan or w/e Your verse was pretty decent, you need to turn up the vocals though. Match em up with the volume of logic's, your flow was good for the most part. delivery isn't to bad, could use some work but meh. Lyrics are good and overall I thought this was a great collaberation. rtf here please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227959
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05-16-06, 10:52 PM | #4 | ||
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sho will..sho will
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