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05-22-04, 07:43 PM | #1 | ||
If thats what you thought
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Piece of my diary that I confess
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What's the reason why I stepped in, I dont know why
What's the reason why I'm stressin', I dont know why Now I think I learned my lesson and now I dont cry She wasn't really mine, She wasn't really mine I gotta lot of shit on my mind, I got some issues Like do this girl really love you, cause she say she miss u But the fact is, she had kids, and had a husband She claimed that she was your girl, but she really wasn't She had love for you and love for another n*gga I could of died if i was caught in the bed with her But I put my life on the line, came back for another time Damn, I fell up in the trap and I can't go back I wish I can rewind time and remain friends at that I shouldn't of never fell in love, Shouldn't of never gave her hugs Yes we should of stayed as friends instead of being what we was, In love What's the reason why I stepped in, I dont know why What's the reason why I'm stressin', I dont know why Now I think I learned my lesson and now I dont cry She wasn't really mine, She wasn't really mine When it comes to a married a woman, please! don't catch feelings Listen to my advice, I'm telling you once.......I'm telling you twice This is not right....When two men is sharing the same slice This is unsual that i'm telling this shit to you... And now you wondering if this story was true... Yes.
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05-22-04, 09:48 PM | #2 | |
Miss Me?
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IP:
Dayum....that shit had a very nice flow....very good emotion on it too....i felt it from ya.....very good drop....9.6/10....only thing i didnt like was parts that didnt rhyme....like one line wouldnt rhyme....but very good drop....props....
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05-23-04, 04:57 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
just some small shit i had to get off my mind a long time ago.
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05-23-04, 09:35 PM | #4 | ||
Light Weight
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IP:
i like it very emotional
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05-24-04, 04:39 PM | #5 | ||
Banned: Biting
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IP:
nice job it was tight
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05-24-04, 05:11 PM | #6 | ||
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IP:
I'm about to put out more of my shit to be known as poet and/or open mic..i bet i can get that award.................
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05-24-04, 06:03 PM | #7 | ||
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IP:
Nice job, I liked it. Except for one thing near the end.
"This is not right....When two men is sharing the same slice." It seemed out of place. The rest of the piece was tight, emotional and well done. This almost seemed like a comdey or a dis-line. Anyway, overall, sick drop!!! Holla back on mine if ya like. |
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05-24-04, 07:00 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
thanks i'll go peep and make sure you check the my new piece called underpressure
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05-25-04, 01:49 AM | #9 | ||
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i thought it was gonna be one of those diary pages you found from some other bitch and were gonna make fun of her...cuz i found this note one time and it was all like
i wanna fill you with my love, not the kind you can see, the kind you can feel that shit was mad funny
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05-25-04, 11:57 AM | #10 | ||
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IP:
up.... this......... shit........................
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05-25-04, 12:03 PM | #11 | ||
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IP:
this was pretty sick i was feelin the emotion you put into it...had me thinkin..what if my gurl had another man LMFAO.....shit was a nice piece...but if you really have a diary..then theres somethin wrong..maybe a journal or sum'n...but diary...lol all in al i give this an 8/10 this was good i was feelin it keep it up..
yo can you check out my open mic and give some feedback on it http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1310827
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05-25-04, 02:03 PM | #12 | ||
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IP:
Damn that shits emotional.. ayo leave that bitch and go for a new one man...LoL.. nah but on the real... that shit had nice ass flow.. keep that shit up~
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05-25-04, 02:05 PM | #13 | ||
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def good it was some deep shyt i liked it keep it comin............................................. .....
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05-26-04, 12:48 PM | #14 | ||
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talk about letin it all out man you jus' made my heart sink 12 inches
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05-28-04, 12:40 PM | #15 | ||
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IP:
thanks for the feedback and keep them coming....
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