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What's good?

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not to many lines, k?

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check.

lets drop 14 or less ..

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The Scholar

Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
That's right yo, and ya know his text's lame ofcourse
.........When even the wordplay in his name is forced

I shame dorks, so you know ya gonna be wrecked, right?
You'll go down on only 14 or less, kinda like ya sex life
You're messed guy, I'm getting girls, for me, it rains birds
While...
You're the reason moms teach their kids to avoid Danger
Stay slain turd, you envy vets, so i'll cream this hog
But Dan is getting good
...while you just DREAM of being Daubs

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Creep's seeing stars, you WON'T elevate, just give it a test
Cuz Kemp thinks you should give it a few months
but LBL thinks you should just GIVE IT A REST

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overall
jack came pretty nice in tha beginnin...he had 1 more quotable...he wins...


vote=jack

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Syndacates...

nameplays against me are old...

drop early?
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Aight...

Jack, your skill doesnt reach my dimention, but my flow's played?
you know your close to death..
....................even your sig shows a picture of your own grave!
you garbage with keys, you need to stop ya thoughts to proceed
you not nice, all your battles were no-shows..
...................thats the only reason you're this far in the league!
Pardon my grieve, but you should've just took a vacation and quit
cause they let you continue, added 2-0 to ya record..
..........................................and now, you thinking you're sick.
LBL just 'cant see you blow up' like 'blind people bombing buildings'
only time 'Jack stands out above the rest'..
......................is when 'watching that movie with Robin Williams'
Think ya flow is just mean? Please, ya not even noticed, just leave
when I'm done, I'll be 'known to get rid of Rip' like 'sewing machines'
Get blown to your knees, claims of you being the dopest is a lie
all your attempts of hard-hitting punches ..
'didnt get a chance to land' like an 'airplane that exploded in the sky'
You're weak, LBL cant accept the thought that your flow's out to kill
cause when it comes to text, 'Jack is not took serious'..
................like a 'robbery by theives who dont know how to steal'

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The Scholar

dope, votes please.

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Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
I shame dorks, so you know ya gonna be wrecked, right?
You'll go down on only 14 or less, kinda like ya sex life

vs

only time 'Jack stands out above the rest'..
......................is when 'watching that movie with Robin Williams'

cause when it comes to text, 'Jack is not took serious'..
.................................like 'theives who dont know how to steal'
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vote: jtr...better overall, more consistent...danger started out real weak got better as he went on...jtr got worse as he went on but still had a ill verse...props to both

Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
I shame dorks, so you know ya gonna be wrecked, right?
You'll go down on only 14 or less, kinda like ya sex life
Stay slain turd, you envy vets, so i'll cream this hog
But Dan is getting good
...while you just DREAM of being Daubs
Creep's seeing stars, you WON'T elevate, just give it a test
Cuz Kemp thinks you should give it a few months
but LBL thinks you should just GIVE IT A REST

SOLID^, feelin the Dan play lol

VS

Jack, your skill doesnt reach my dimention, but my flow's played?
you know your close to death..
....................even your sig shows a picture of your own grave!
Think ya flow is just mean? Please, ya not even noticed, just leave
when I'm done, I'll be 'known to get rid of Rip' like 'sewing machines'

2nd was solid, your lines were stretched as fuck though.

V./ JTR

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Daubs MySpace

Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
I shame dorks, so you know ya gonna be wrecked, right?
You'll go down on only 14 or less, kinda like ya sex life
Stay slain turd, you envy vets, so i'll cream this hog
But Dan is getting good
...while you just DREAM of being Daubs

Vs

Think ya flow is just mean? Please, ya not even noticed, just leave
when I'm done, I'll be 'known to get rid of Rip' like 'sewing machines'

V/Jtr this was a good battle...danjure u came wit a decent verse that had a couple good punchs but it wasnt consistent and stretched...jtr had better concepts and punchs..and a more consistent verse

Just so everyone knows, for my first bar it's

Danjure S. WRITEr

Write/W.Rite

W.Rite = Mr W.Rite on RB

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Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
Creep's seeing stars, you WON'T elevate, just give it a test
Cuz Kemp thinks you should give it a few months
but LBL thinks you should just GIVE IT A REST

vs.

Jack, your skill doesnt reach my dimention, but my flow's played?
you know your close to death..
....................even your sig shows a picture of your own grave!
LBL just 'cant see you blow up' like 'blind people bombing buildings'
only time 'Jack stands out above the rest'..
......................is when 'watching that movie with Robin Williams'

Vote - JTR. . pretty easily.

Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
That's right yo, and ya know his text's lame ofcourse
.........When even the wordplay in his name is forced
Creep's seeing stars, you WON'T elevate, just give it a test
Cuz Kemp thinks you should give it a few months
but LBL thinks you should just GIVE IT A REST

vs.

Jack, your skill doesnt reach my dimention, but my flow's played?
you know your close to death..
....................even your sig shows a picture of your own grave!

Umm JTR got this pretty easy, Danjure didn't come out with anything to really grab my attention that qoute was there due to mercy lol. JTR Consistent with the whole drop.

Vote - JTR

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