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04-05-03, 05:38 PM | #1 | |
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"7 Deadly Rap"
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Sloth, Lust, Greed, Envy/
Pride, Wrath, and Gluttony/ These are the seven things that can destroy a rapper's soul/ trust me, I already know/ cuz Im......... Im....... Im the most gluttonous muthafucka you've eva seen/ always ea-ting, but never once ever hun-ga-ry/ glut-to-ny's, got me/ de-vour-ing/ ev-er-y thing I see/ filled with greed/ and avarice, Panda-ris/ Box was locked/ (Pandora's Box, changed to rhyme with avarice) til I wanted more/ and exposed it to the whole fuckin world/ you could give me earth, and it still wouldnt work/ could give me the universe, and it still isnt worth/ what I really want/ which is what this other guy's already got/ cuz even tho Im greedy, Im more envy-ous/ try as I might, the grass will always be greener on the other side/ born of absolute desire and green eyes/ but no ambition cuz Im the most indolent prick you've never met/ "fix the fence?" shit I cant even pitch a tent/ here u can have my fuck/ cuz Im too lazy to give it, so Im givin' it up/ more sloth then the animal if it was passed out and drunk/ and since I dont have it any more, I can honestly say "I dont give a fuck" 7 ways to lie, 7 ways to find, 7 ways are mine/ here just let me have a try/ 7 ways to rhyme, 7 ways to cry, 7 ways to live/ and 7 ways to die/ Im back with an inordinate craving for pleasure/ my horniness is off the charts...can't be measured/ attracted to shit that's not the norm/ beatin' off to bizare, hairy, fat, chink porn/ always humpin and fuckin and rubbin one out/ never humpin or fuckin, but Im cummin out loud/ walkin around with a permanent erection/ cryin out "OW", with this permanent infection/ Im a wannabe porn star, u dont even have to pay me/ cuz Ima still be lustin even when Im eighty/ Ill be cummin on teens like Arthur Fonzarelli/ no one but time can tell me/ how good Im gonna be/ shit right now I see myself as the baddest emcee/ already better then Pac, Slim Shady/ B.I.G., Nas and Talib Kweli/ (I dont really, just to show Pride) not gonna even try blah, blah, bla-blee/ this goes beyond words, goes beyond rap/ cuz God dont know the wrath/ of a foresaken emcee/ I butcher double-crossers in life and in their dreams/ a vindictive vengeful muthafucka killin in tha streets/ rage with absolute passion/ look at me wrong, bitch u just askin/ for 7 ways to lie, 7 ways to find, 7 ways are mine/ here just let me have a try/ 7 ways to rhyme, 7 ways to cry, 7 ways to live/ and 7 ways to die/ .....and thats how we live and end our life, .....7 ways....Hooligan X...520.....peace.... |
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04-05-03, 09:53 PM | #2 | ||
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damn why niggas be sleeping n shit, this was sum nice shit dogg
hook was co0, lyrics was on point liked the second verse u should tryna put this in audio
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04-05-03, 10:01 PM | #3 | |
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thx a lot for uppin
ur right fuckas sleep like a bitch in here |
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04-05-03, 10:25 PM | #4 | |
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returnin tha favor
nice topical verse homie.Real diff subject and its good to be original.Switched it up a lil to tell bout 5 different stories @ once but it came out real hot.Stay ^ -Avi |
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04-05-03, 10:42 PM | #5 | |
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thx for uppin
everyone else that is sleepin WAKE UP!!! I posted on a bunch of threads so please return the favor thx |
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04-05-03, 10:44 PM | #6 | |
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this was nice, had great vocab and it didnt sound forced, i like the whole thing, but the 2nd verse was better the start of the first verse kind of threw me off.
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04-06-03, 01:08 PM | #7 | |
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thx for uppin
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04-06-03, 01:56 PM | #8 | |
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i thought that shit was good, and the verse was hella tight too
i agree w/ d.l.w. i think u should think about recordin that in an audio, thx 4 writin 2 me , peace soilder22 |
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04-06-03, 02:01 PM | #9 | |
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thx a lot man
and I will keep peepin ur shit everyone else c'mon I need some fuckin feedback Im just lookin for one or two more responses thats it, Iwill peep ur shit in return if I already havent |
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04-06-03, 02:03 PM | #10 | |
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yeah nice piece man
same reasons as given above^^^^ |
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04-06-03, 02:37 PM | #11 | |
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if i knew a lot more on the seven deadly sins and what they meant the rhyme probably would made a whole lot more sense to me....but everything flowed perfectly....i liked it.....
mad uppins |
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04-06-03, 03:23 PM | #12 | |
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thx for uppin
lookin for one more |
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04-06-03, 04:41 PM | #13 | |
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great choice of words...def one of tha best i read all day! it had alot of meanin..i liked it..
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04-06-03, 05:57 PM | #14 | |
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thx for uppin
go vote on my battle against 512 |
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04-06-03, 06:00 PM | #15 | |
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its tight cuz its original....but i cant go off like the rest of the katz in here bout how great its written....jus got boring
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